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by Blackfïsk
Fri Nov 20, 2015 1:58 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: roughs for project 3
Replies: 16
Views: 2512

Re: roughs for project 3

I like the idea of making the website look like OSX I would however scrap the whole computer image, just make it look like a desktop, maybe even with Photoshop or Illustrator open.
by Blackfïsk
Fri Nov 20, 2015 1:57 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Prelim
Replies: 16
Views: 2601

Re: Project 3 Prelim

I also think the paper torn design looks better, the inner design is also really good!
by Blackfïsk
Fri Nov 20, 2015 1:56 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: GRC Web Site Preliminary - Tucker M
Replies: 14
Views: 2409

GRC Web Site Preliminary - Tucker M

So I decided to to a simple color palette that is taken from the GRC logo I made in GRC119. I chose the color Pantone 17-1463 which won color of the year in 2012. The website designs are inspired by flat design and simple shapes and simple minimal layout. That's about it :p Even though the color sc...
by Blackfïsk
Thu Oct 15, 2015 10:46 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Prelim Critique
Replies: 15
Views: 2379

Re: Project 2 Prelim Critique

The second Idea on the homepage works really well. I'm not sure what happened with the second page, your banner no longer stretches the whole page and the text is like bleeding from the edge. Also maybe make the banner a bit smaller and extend the brown across the page, and add something fun to look...
by Blackfïsk
Thu Oct 15, 2015 10:43 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project#2
Replies: 16
Views: 2654

Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#2

Please use the second one, its vastly better, and actually very well done all I would change is that orange to different color, maybe complementary to brown like a baby blue? Also please make a logo for the site! Your second design would look so great with a really well designed logo, something simp...
by Blackfïsk
Thu Oct 15, 2015 10:39 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: What do you think - project 2 prelim
Replies: 15
Views: 2556

Re: What do you think - project 2 prelim

So I'm not crazy about that orange... the flintstones rock things has some cool potential, maybe render a background similar? with a nice sky or something?
by Blackfïsk
Thu Oct 15, 2015 10:35 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary
Replies: 16
Views: 2484

Re: Project 2 Preliminary

"Made on a Mac" had me rolling on the fucking floor, I can't even. They are both really well developed! I'm really impressed, I would actually just use those awesome simple graphics like the bike and pizza on the first design and just have them populate a big footer or the background, and ...
by Blackfïsk
Thu Oct 15, 2015 10:30 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project#2
Replies: 13
Views: 2048

Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#2

UGHH! I love that huge-ass japanese text, It's the shit, I would like to see something happening with the background other than black, maybe a bigger photo across the top cropped and then a very soft gradient? I'm not sure really. OOOOORRRR >.> <.< You could go old school Chinese/Japanese cinema sty...
by Blackfïsk
Thu Oct 15, 2015 10:25 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary for Project Two
Replies: 13
Views: 2278

Re: Preliminary for Project Two

Your images are not loading? Also your original website is http://www.gsrsv.org/
by Blackfïsk
Thu Oct 15, 2015 10:18 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Prelim project two
Replies: 15
Views: 4907

Re: Prelim project two

I really like the fonts on the ad. Also, I'm going to want to see you design a cupcake logo, it's really fun to do, I've done it for a bakery, make it all pastels and such. https://www.facebook.com/stetsonssweets/timeline I like that you have that background at the bottom blurred, I'd like to see th...