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by Peelio
Tue Oct 31, 2017 7:09 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: preliminary
Replies: 13
Views: 2439

Re: preliminary

The first design with the lighted orb object is visually interesting -it captures the attention of the viewer well. The typefaces work for the design and are easy to read. The current students page has a few spacing flaws, but overall is strong and holds true to the style of the first page well.
by Peelio
Tue Oct 31, 2017 7:00 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 rough
Replies: 13
Views: 2528

Re: Project 2 rough

The first design with the rainbow colors is interesting and fun. The rainbow colors are great to keep visual interest of kids and the science guy is neat. Try incorporating the colors of the science guy home page with the tiger page to unify the two designs.
by Peelio
Tue Oct 31, 2017 6:49 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary
Replies: 15
Views: 2355

Re: Project 2 Preliminary

The design with the forest at the top is strong and visually appealing. The dragon image would flow better if it were pointing to the left. The navigation and everything is easy to read and understand. The Celtic theme and colors ties the design together well.
by Peelio
Tue Oct 31, 2017 6:40 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary Critique
Replies: 15
Views: 2400

Re: Preliminary Critique

The design with the picture of the building on it is easier to navigate and understand. The navigation text and the Yale motto text are similar in size and color making them blend together. Decreasing the motto and Yale crest size would help to create more space and definition. The about page design...
by Peelio
Tue Oct 31, 2017 6:21 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Prelim Project 2
Replies: 14
Views: 2296

Re: Prelim Project 2

The design with the woman on the home page is strong and sleek. The photo's contrast is interesting and the content goes well with fashion and beauty. The bar at the bottom may not be needed. The about page is a strong design too. If the body copy were aligned to the hours it might flow better. Over...
by Peelio
Sun Oct 29, 2017 10:18 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio
Replies: 15
Views: 2170

Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio

Hello Everybody, The website I am redesigning for project 2 is http://www.sierrasafarizoo.org/default.html grc175_project02_bad_website.jpg The competing site is http://animalark.org/ . The first design has a more sophisticated color scheme. It targets individuals as well as families interested in v...
by Peelio
Fri Oct 13, 2017 10:32 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: GRC 175 home web page - final
Replies: 7
Views: 1017

Re: GRC 175 home web page - final

Hello,
The alignment of elements looks well done. If the body copy was in a single column in the center, the page layout might flow better. The theme/image is peaceful, the font and color scheme adding to the success. :)
by Peelio
Fri Oct 13, 2017 10:24 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 12
Views: 1786

Re: Project 1 Final

Hello Marco!
The design is looking good! The more simple, streamlined homepage is stronger. Your name could be more prominent on the page. :) The designs to the other pages are looking good too. Each page is solidly unified by the nav bar and header, offset by the colorful, creative logo.
by Peelio
Fri Oct 13, 2017 10:11 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 14
Views: 1851

Re: Project 1 Final

Hello,
Your design looks great! The incorporation of the image adds a bit of depth to the page. The body copy flow is kind of strange, but will probably be better to tell with the real text in there. The spacing looks great!
by Peelio
Fri Oct 13, 2017 10:06 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final Design
Replies: 14
Views: 1627

Re: Project 1 Final Design

Hello,
The design is looking good! The textures in the image are interesting. The GRC175 title is large and dominating the page. Also a typo in the body copy on "illustrator". The page looks sharp and the alignment is spot on!