I love the first one with the typographical aspect. It really conveys what the program focuses on!
I think you could add some contrast to your navigation bar? Maybe commit to a dark grey that would make the words pop or bring some darker colors into the type?
Great job!
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- Tue Nov 28, 2017 1:19 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project 3
- Replies: 12
- Views: 1937
- Tue Nov 28, 2017 1:16 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Box's Project 3 Preliminary
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2073
Re: Box's Project 3 Preliminary
I really like the second layout, but that being said I feel like you could add a TON more to make it more dynamic. I think the easiest way to do that is to play around in the software you've been using to step it up a notch, show us what this program has taught you with drop shadows, bold shapes, an...
- Tue Nov 28, 2017 1:13 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project #3 ~ prelim
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2336
Re: Project #3 ~ prelim
Hey! I like both of these, the first is actually my favorite. I have a lot of wadded up pieces of paper that litter my floors some nights. I think if you could make the imagery in the background a little more expressive of that idea, like a guy leaning over a desk with a lamp over his head but with ...
- Wed Nov 22, 2017 4:07 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project Three Critique _Lea
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2172
Re: Project Three Critique _Lea
I love love love the second one! I think the first looks more like a programming certificate and the second really drives home the creative aspect of the degree.
Very Nicely done!
Very Nicely done!
- Wed Nov 22, 2017 2:50 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project 3 Prelim: The Home Stretch
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2089
Project 3 Prelim: The Home Stretch
I wanted to keep with my color scheme of choice and a minimalist feel. I focused on visual organization, keeping things in their boxes, and such and so forth. For the First go of it, I wanted the window looking into the program feel. I think I was pretty successful with it, but I'm not sure I'm happ...
- Fri Nov 17, 2017 12:25 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: [Project 2] Live and running!
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2826
Re: [Project 2] Live and running!
HERE'S THE REAL POST! Yay!
Lookin' good, also left a comment on your other one, and am too lazy to copy and paste.
All in all good work.
Lookin' good, also left a comment on your other one, and am too lazy to copy and paste.
All in all good work.
- Fri Nov 17, 2017 12:22 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Final
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2129
Re: Project 2 Final
I love your personal page!!! Such a nice picture! Did you take it? If so, props. If not, you still have good taste. I'm curious about the amount of space between the box and the title... Was that intentional? As for your Re-done website. It's so western it's giving me the desire to go find a ghost t...
- Fri Nov 17, 2017 12:18 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: [Final Critique] Project 2
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1542
Re: [Final Critique] Project 2
Ok, maybe my internet is crappy. It was a little slow on the uptake of your castle image, which is stunning btw. I love your personal page! Zombo is a little on the iffy in my opinion, I REALLY REALLY REALLY wanted to know what a newzletter would look and sound like. I know it's the point, but I wan...
- Fri Nov 17, 2017 12:12 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project Two Live Websites, by Francisco
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2471
Re: Project Two Live Websites, by Francisco
It seems to be alive and well, and that's all we all wanted by the end of the projects, right!? Just glad to have it done and up! I like what you did with your personal website, it looks AWESOME. The Dot-loving person inside me was squealing with happiness! On the Corporate loveliness you made... I ...
- Fri Nov 17, 2017 12:07 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project 2 link
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2286
Re: project 2 link
Hey! Nice going, I really like the way things are headed. My poor little brain would LOVE to see a splash of color somewhere. They layouts are so well developed I'd love to see some color. Maybe the blue that is reflected in the product images? I think that would really take things to the next level...