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by Jose_M
Mon Oct 16, 2017 8:12 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final Rough
Replies: 14
Views: 1933

Re: Final Rough

Zera-Chann,
This one is cool and fun to look at. The only things to improve are aligning your bottom right text with the pink containment box and the bottom left content with the links (blue boxes).
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 16, 2017 7:59 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: project one
Replies: 13
Views: 1619

Re: project one

JulianEmme,This works really well visually speaking and good font choice. The things to change wood be to use the complete dmcc logo and to place your email at the bottom center of your design.
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 16, 2017 7:55 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final Design
Replies: 14
Views: 1627

Re: Project 1 Final Design

Cassiebowers,
I think this is finished. The contrast is improved and you can read all the text in the design so good work.
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 16, 2017 7:52 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 14
Views: 1851

Re: Project 1 Final

ktwy,
I like this. It's light and easy to read.
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 16, 2017 7:42 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 12
Views: 1786

Re: Project 1 Final

Marco_Horta1,
These are finished products and they look good.
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 16, 2017 7:30 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Final
Replies: 15
Views: 2381

Re: Project One Final

Kyler_Rose,
Digital! nice. Colors are awesome and so is the theme/concept. The things to improve on are justifying your body copy and hierarchy between your subheads and links and so on.


Jose Macias.
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 16, 2017 7:18 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 12
Views: 1744

Re: Project 1 Final

Pearl_Underwood,
I like the style and color choices of your home page, makes it feel homey. The image is great, but it's floating and it doesn't sit well with the composition.
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 16, 2017 7:07 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio
Replies: 15
Views: 2089

Re: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio

Peelio,
Turned out great. I like the theme and overall layout. I think it can use an extra layer of body copy somewhere above your personal logo.


Jose Macias.
by Jose_M
Fri Oct 13, 2017 11:07 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: GRC 175 home web page - final
Replies: 7
Views: 1017

GRC 175 home web page - final

So based on previous feed back some of the improvements that I made were proper text alignment and leading, color changes with the navigation bar and logo, and more content on the right although it could use some more, perhaps an image? This home web page was meant to be easy to use, easy to identif...
by Jose_M
Fri Oct 13, 2017 10:53 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1: Final Draft, by Francisco
Replies: 15
Views: 2097

Re: Project 1: Final Draft, by Francisco

fjbo,
The color choices, the layout of the headline, subheads, and body copy work very well. The improvements needed would be with the images because they just seem to be floating and don't serve your web design as a whole. Perhaps some research in composition is needed.


Jose Macias.