GRC 175 Learning and Discussion Forum

Hi Tiffani,

I like the top set more because the design is strong without being to cluttered while the bottom set feels more like a website for makeup artists to me. Again, I would just try to get some consistent design elements throughout all the pages maybe with font choice or geometric shapes.

Hi Dalanie,
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I like the bottom set more because I think the page is more balance. I would remove the lizard at the top that's facing left and move the other lizard over to create stronger eye-movement/sense of direction.

Hi Lingling,

I like rough 1 because the design of the interface and the color is fun. I would just try to balance the content at the bottom a little more. Nice Work!

I like the bottom set of roughs more because the top set feels a little childish to me, but the bottom feels a little institutional in a suppressing way. Maybe try a different font with the bottom design and play with the type to balance it a little better.

I like your bottom layout. I like the 3 dimensional feel and the imagery. I would just try to add some consistency to the pages, but I feel smarter already just by looking at your comps.

Hi Ryan,

I like the second set of roughs more because I like the horizontal composition and strong contrast. You might consider adding some pops of color to it though.

I like the top set of roughs more. They exude the clean design with which you work so well. I like the vertical column in the middle; I would just watch the balance if you end up adding other items.

Hey Shalie,

I like the colors and imagery you chose; it makes the website feel very inviting.
There are some problems with the spacing; and there are some legibility issues with the body copy on certain pages, but if you corrected those, I think you would have a very successful redesign. Good Job!

Hi Everyone, My name is Dominique Boudinot, and this is preliminary critique for project 3 GRC 175. For this project we had to redesign the graphic communications program website. The only parameters were that we had to include the current tmcc logo, which had to appear on a similar place on each pa...

Hi Elizabeth, I like your homepage; it is very cool; it feels like a album cover. I also like your simple redesign. I am a fan of the tire track; it creates nice eye-movement, and I think the layout is very successful; I especially like the way you overlap, so that the content images are behind the ...