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- Wed Nov 29, 2017 3:57 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project 3-Preliminary
- Replies: 12
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Re: Project 3-Preliminary
The green design is really easy to navigate and is a nice idea, but the paint design is more interesting visually. Try to find a hi-res photo of the dripping paint, and for the title I think you can get away with making the black box solid instead of transparent, with the title white on top and then...
- Wed Nov 29, 2017 3:52 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project #3 ~ prelim
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2403
Re: Project #3 ~ prelim
I'm a big fan of your second design! It might be worthwhile to make the footer text white and your bodycopy text a little larger, on both pages. Maybe also try making the top part of both pages the same, in regards to the nav and logo?
- Wed Nov 29, 2017 3:21 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project 3 Prelim: The Home Stretch
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2155
Re: Project 3 Prelim: The Home Stretch
The window concept is much stronger and comes together a lot nicer, visually. The font used for all of the major, larger words is hard to read, and also has contrast issues, being white against much lighter greens. I really want to like it, but have a hard time doing so overall. It actually seems to...
- Wed Nov 29, 2017 3:15 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project 3 Prelim
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2033
Re: Project 3 Prelim
Both of your layouts are really nice! I do prefer the second one. Having the text overlay those large images feels really nice, especially with the corner marks. My only gripes are that the navbar might be easy to miss, especially on the homepage, due to how tiny the words are, and there's some cont...
- Wed Nov 29, 2017 3:13 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Box's Project 3 Preliminary
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2118
Re: Box's Project 3 Preliminary
I like the first design better. It feels easier to view and is nicely expressive. My only major gripe is that the font, while really cool, is hard to read in the footer. I might also recommend that, instead of using true dark black, try using the slightly lighter variant that's in the TMCC logo, as ...
- Wed Nov 22, 2017 4:38 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: [Project 3] Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2143
[Project 3] Preliminary Critique
Hello! So these are my two design ideas for Project 3. They are missing information currently and missing notable, required page links. I wanted to really focus on organization and spacious design with these. The first design utilizes a navbar up top with an additional "interior" navbar fu...
- Wed Nov 22, 2017 1:11 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Final- Link Issue Fixed can view site
- Replies: 1
- Views: 867
Re: Project 2 Final- Link Issue Fixed can view site
It looks great! I love the font choices and general layout!
The navbar and logo image seem to move places and/or change sizes across pages, and it can be hard to discern the navbar from the normal body type.
The navbar and logo image seem to move places and/or change sizes across pages, and it can be hard to discern the navbar from the normal body type.
- Wed Nov 22, 2017 12:53 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project two_final_slowly
- Replies: 2
- Views: 906
Re: Project two_final_slowly
It's really cute! Thematically it works together well and your navigation feels nice. I do think you could benefit from some padding on the left, on your Home/Order/Location pages, for the main body contents. So it isn't all right up against the far left side of the containing box.
- Fri Nov 17, 2017 7:29 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Final
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2403
Re: Project 2 Final
Both sites are gorgeous! I love how expressive and nonstandard your home site is. It feels very artsy. Your nav bar buttons could have a larger type size I think, and the gray type is hard to read against the pink with how thin and narrow the letters are. On your salon site, on the About page, the H...
- Fri Nov 17, 2017 7:24 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 - Final
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2409
Re: Project 2 - Final
Both sites are incredibly eye-catching and feel so nice to look at! I adore the layout and organization of both! My only criticism is that, on your OJ site, the navbar is hard to read and gets lost compared to the other navigation buttons on the right-hand side. Maybe switch the typefaces in both ar...