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- Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:29 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Prelim Project 2
- Replies: 14
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Re: Prelim Project 2
Great job! Think both are visually strong. I am going for the first layout. But I would maybe put the second photo on your second rough on the extra page of your first layout. Think the image on your first layout is a little busy. Really like the contrast of your color with the black and white photo...
- Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:26 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 15
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Re: Preliminary Critique
your first layout. That is the one I would go with. Really captures that scholarly look, and also your images are great. The typeface works well. On the second layout, I like your colors. but to me it looks a little busy. maybe for the first layout incorporate some of the colors from the second.
- Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:24 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2466
Re: Project 2
Nice image on the top. I think having one horse on either side. Too many and it gets a little busy. Like your typeface you chose.
- Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:23 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project two Layout Roughs
- Replies: 14
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Re: Project two Layout Roughs
First ones, I prefer. The images and type give the layout dimension and also I think a mood that reflects Yale. Saw the original site and your layout makes it look so much better!
- Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:21 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2245
Re: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique
Really liking the more colorful layout with the veggies and fruits in the heart shape. Great colors and I like your typeface. Looks very kid friendly and I think the information comes across very nicely.
- Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:19 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project_2_roughs
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2363
Re: project_2_roughs
After having seen the original site, what a difference. Favoring the pages with the four images. navigation is clear, images add dimension, and it is simplified which is what I think this site needed.
- Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:16 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2674
Re: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
Very good organization and I love your colors! Looks very inviting. Good layout. I do like the second one more. The photos really add a lot to your layout. Think it looks more inviting. Also, the information is easier to comprehend too. Like your typefaces as well.
- Tue Oct 24, 2017 9:51 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project Two Prelim
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2432
Project Two Prelim
Hi, Here are my roughs and sample pages. I am redoing this website. http://www.exmouth-view.co.uk/ There is a lot of room for improvement. Found some good images of the area, designed a logo, and am rebranding it as an nice, elegant hotel by the sea. For the first rough I was going for a balance of ...
- Wed Oct 11, 2017 9:53 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Final
- Replies: 14
- Views: 1854
Re: Project 1 Final
Very nice, clean, artistic layout. Really liking your signature and colors.
- Wed Oct 11, 2017 9:52 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Final
- Replies: 15
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Re: Project One Final
Very whimsical. Cool background. Like your theme and it has a 3d look to it. Great illustration. Easy to navigate.