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- Thu Oct 23, 2014 1:10 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project 2 - CP
- Replies: 17
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Re: Preliminary Critique for Project 2 - CP
Candace- I really like the theme you've got going on here! The color scheme isn't bad, but what I think might work better is to pull colors from the header image used of the theatre sign- perhaps instead of green, various shades and tints of those golden yellows would pull the whole thing together? ...
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 1:04 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project #2
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2663
Re: project #2
Elizabeth- These are great starts to a better website for this company! I do like the home page and logo design of the first design, but while the navigation suits it better to be on the bottom, I prefer it being on the top (I think that has to do with Western practices on reading from left-to-right...
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 1:00 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 19
- Views: 3213
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
*sigh* Why, Ashley?! Haha you're making my already empty stomach growl even louder looking at these designs! Anyway these are pretty flippin' great designs, both have a nice flow and easy navigation that will cater to users of all skill levels, which it seems, would just be hungry pizza-and-pasta pa...
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 12:52 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2713
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Hey, Dalanie! Your second layout has a much nicer flow and is more organized than your first, so I'd go with that. The colors aren't bad, it's kinda nice that the background color is more muted so the title color pops, I'm just not sure they work so well together, because one is kind of in the same ...
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 12:42 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project #2_Roughs
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2472
Re: Project #2_Roughs
Hi, Danielle! While these are far better than the original, I'm afraid I have to be honest with you. While the layout of the first design is nice with the navigation at the top, the colors are still pretty shockingly bright and a little painful to look at with the high-chroma gradients and complemen...
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 12:35 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Roughs
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2685
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Roughs
Hi, Dominique! You've got some pretty solid starts on all of these! I like that the imagery takes up the whole background on the first design, but I somehow prefer the layout of the second concept. If there's any way to combine the two I think it would make for a great-looking website! Also, I like ...
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 12:31 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Roughs2_by_Amy
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2983
Re: Roughs2_by_Amy
Hi, Amy! These are great starts. I favor the endless scrolling layout over the other. What I would suggest though, is changing your color scheme or at least, switch up what you've currently got. You have the right idea with the rainbow buttons, but the main imagery is so gray and bleak, and you have...
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 12:18 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2323
Re: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
Yeh no the current site sucks. Haha anyway these layouts are far easier on the eyes and easier to navigate. I like the color scheme of the first design, but I prefer the layout of the second one. If you could combine the two, it would make some serious video game magic.
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 12:14 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: 1st roughs for project 2 for prelim critique
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2525
Re: 1st roughs for project 2 for prelim critique
Hi, Georgia! Though the first layout is visually more exciting with the colors and imagery, I'm not sure that the design is as fluid or easy to navigate. I definitely prefer the second layout, the colors and navigation are aesthetically more pleasing. I suggest adding a link for "birthday parti...
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 11:57 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 16
- Views: 2900
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Hi, Alexa! Though you only have one rough, I really like the layout and design concept so far! It really ties together the theme with the services being advertised, and would definitely make me excited to take driving lessons from this company! I think if you found a cool typeface that reflected tha...