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- Wed Sep 20, 2017 4:48 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 - Preliminary Critique - Melissa Peel
- Replies: 16
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Re: Project 1 - Preliminary Critique - Melissa Peel
The first layout is really cool and intriguing, kind of like you don't know what to expect when you 'enter' but the second layout is my favorite. Using green and black make a very bold statement which will give you more oohs and awws. I am curious if there is a way to make the M more prominent also ...
- Wed Sep 20, 2017 4:36 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 - Preliminary
- Replies: 18
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Re: Project 1 - Preliminary
I think both layouts are great but i think I am leaning toward the top one with the picture of a band. I definitely think it is clean and everything is easy to find which makes websites so much better to navigate on. My only comment is the placement and alignment of your name on the page. It seems l...
- Mon Sep 18, 2017 4:29 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1, First Critique
- Replies: 17
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Re: Project 1, First Critique
I think the second one is my favorite. I like how you use white to make cut outs in the color blocks. I was thinking what if the colors were a little bit darker or had a little bit more contrast between them. Besides that I really like the layout and set-up for the second page.
- Wed Sep 13, 2017 2:58 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1-Preliminary
- Replies: 16
- Views: 2267
Re: Project 1-Preliminary
I really like the ideas for your websites, especially the lined paper one. It looks like it was torn out of a notebook which makes it very interesting to look at and think about. I had a thought for the second one (with the paint brushes), what if you added a painting easel or palette? the colors/pa...
- Wed Sep 13, 2017 2:34 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Critique _Lea
- Replies: 16
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Project One Critique _Lea
These are two concepts for project one I decided to move forward with. I still am playing around with fonts and the transparency but i enjoy both topics for them. I need to work on the shadowing for the buttons to make them look more realistic but for now they look fine. I like the black and white p...