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by Ltrueworthy
Thu Oct 26, 2017 10:38 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2-Preliminary
Replies: 14
Views: 2194

Re: Project 2-Preliminary

HI there, so I like the light version because it is easier to read but the dark version relates more to the game so I'm wondering if maybe you could add a box thing around the writing in the dark version to make it easier to read, if that makes sense. The background is great same with the text but i...
by Ltrueworthy
Wed Oct 25, 2017 11:21 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique
Replies: 14
Views: 2240

Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique

Here are my roughs, I have mixed feelings about them. I don't know if they are too plain or too busy. Let me know what you think because I am stuck.

My website is PennyJuice.com
by Ltrueworthy
Mon Oct 09, 2017 4:20 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final Rough
Replies: 14
Views: 1932

Re: Final Rough

I love how happy and open your layout is. My only thought is that the drawing of you, the head looks a little small compared to the rest of your body, besides that I love the colors and how everything flows really well.
Good Job
by Ltrueworthy
Mon Oct 09, 2017 4:18 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio
Replies: 15
Views: 2089

Re: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio

I honestly have no comments for your website. I think it is beautiful and everything looks really well together. I don't even know what you could fix since it already looks great.

Good Job!
by Ltrueworthy
Mon Oct 09, 2017 4:17 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Final
Replies: 15
Views: 2326

Re: Project One Final

I love your font and the paintbrush and pencil, my only comment is the lime green. I think if you want it to be a messy organized layout I would add more shades of green (or other colors) or add more of just that lime green everywhere, maybe even behind your About me section. Besides my comment, I r...
by Ltrueworthy
Mon Oct 09, 2017 4:11 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final Project 1
Replies: 16
Views: 2205

Re: Final Project 1

The flow is probably my favorite part of your layout. I think I like the blue one better because the other one seems a little to bright for me where my eyes need to adjust, if that makes sense. I really like the whole concept though especially the cut outs of the flowers.

Good Job!
by Ltrueworthy
Fri Oct 06, 2017 11:53 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Final
Replies: 15
Views: 1889

Project One Final

Hi everyone,
Here is my final layout for project one. I changed the font and made the astronaut guy the larger image instead of the TMCC logo. I think it looks nice and I am really happy with the colors.
by Ltrueworthy
Wed Sep 20, 2017 5:01 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Critique
Replies: 18
Views: 2210

Re: Project One Critique

I think I have to go with the second layout. I love simple black and white websites so this is definitely my go to. The only thing I would say is that it does seem a little crowed. What if the links/pages were in their own link to free up some space. Other then that I really like the second one, esp...
by Ltrueworthy
Wed Sep 20, 2017 4:56 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Roughs, by Francisco
Replies: 19
Views: 2416

Re: Project 1 Roughs, by Francisco

I think the second layout is my favorite, I really like the colors you used including the neon green. It kind of looks like a statement piece on a wall for a fancy art place ha. It has that BAM factor which i always enjoy. The first layout is nice but doesn't have any "BAM" factor for me. ...
by Ltrueworthy
Wed Sep 20, 2017 4:51 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Roughs
Replies: 18
Views: 2392

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Roughs

To be completely honest, I love them both. I don't know which one is better haha. I really like the geo-structure thing used making the page clean but funky yet I love the block colors in your second page. Also your name font is amazing, it gets the point across but in such an elegant way