Search found 37 matches

by fjbo
Mon Oct 09, 2017 11:43 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final Project 1
Replies: 16
Views: 2205

Re: Final Project 1

Your concept is great, the most powerful thing in your design is the not-so-obvious unity that you create with the white flowers. I like how the flowers visually connect to each other, despite being separated. That is great design. Your sections are really well contained, effectively organizing your...
by fjbo
Mon Oct 09, 2017 11:36 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio
Replies: 15
Views: 2089

Re: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio

I really like your layout. It's pretty professional and minimal, yet very strong. I would agree with Kyler, branding is very, very important. You want to make your logo the first thing people see or give it its own space. Your colors are consistent and harmonic. Pretty good job there. I believe your...
by fjbo
Mon Oct 09, 2017 11:08 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Final
Replies: 15
Views: 2366

Re: Project One Final

I like the "Sketchy" style you worked around. I also liked the asymmetrical layout and how it drives the viewer's eye. You imagery totally supports your copy. Good choice. Personally, I would use more variety of colors for your color palette since you are communicating that your goal is to...
by fjbo
Mon Oct 09, 2017 10:56 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Final
Replies: 13
Views: 1988

Re: Project One Final

Really Stylish! I am a big fan of black-out design and your website is a very good example effective use of black. I am not a big fan of huge headers, except for yours. Your header is really efficient in terms of use of space and hierarchy establishment. It calls for attention without being overwhel...
by fjbo
Mon Oct 09, 2017 10:35 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Aries Project 1 Layout Final
Replies: 14
Views: 1633

Re: Aries Project 1 Layout Final

I like your design a lot. Again, as I told you at your preliminary draft, I totally inspires freedom and a very own style. I agree with Michael, your header is awesome. Although I think the D-Pad could play a better role popping off the center of the footer. Sort of a "closing image" or ki...
by fjbo
Mon Oct 09, 2017 10:23 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1: Final Draft, by Francisco
Replies: 15
Views: 2097

Re: Project 1: Final Draft, by Francisco

I still love the color scheme you choose for this site's design. Issue I have is where are your links to other parts of the site, you have Menu and thats about it. I am hoping you add more for those links, maybe even include previews to those links on the home page. You are totally right Aries , I ...
by fjbo
Wed Oct 04, 2017 5:03 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1: Final Draft, by Francisco
Replies: 15
Views: 2097

Project 1: Final Draft, by Francisco

HERE IT IS For my final draft I decided to go the bubble themed design. I want to give that "Developer" look since it's what my final objective is, but emphasizing on my Design skills to give it a strong visual punch to the site. BUBBLES Bubbles...? ...bubbles! I know, it feels like bubbl...
by fjbo
Mon Sep 25, 2017 4:56 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project one
Replies: 18
Views: 2457

Re: project one

INSPIRING... this one is very inspiring: http://www.grc175.com/forum/download/file.php?id=1887&mode=view I don't even know what to say really, your work is very strong already. It's very cool, literally it feels fresh and chill. The one thing is probably avoid flatting your design that much, unl...
by fjbo
Mon Sep 25, 2017 4:49 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Preliminary
Replies: 18
Views: 2244

Re: Project 1 - Preliminary

I agree with you, the second layout feels stronger and playful: http://www.grc175.com/forum/download/file.php?id=1881&mode=view I like the stage/canvas/slider/etc on your first one though. It feels more personal. Speaking of which, I hope you don't take the following as a personal thing. I like ...
by fjbo
Mon Sep 25, 2017 4:21 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Aries Project 1
Replies: 18
Views: 2348

Re: Aries Project 1

This one for sure: http://www.grc175.com/forum/download/file.php?id=1910&t=1 I like the originality and freedom that it inspires, I love your visual elements. I believe your text could be organized in a more fun and attractive way so it plays with that eye illustration, it's pretty intriguing. I...