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- Wed Feb 10, 2016 11:26 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1, preliminary critique
- Replies: 12
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Re: Project 1, preliminary critique
I prefer the minimalistic design. The minimalistic design with the class look of the seriffed font used for everything but the menu on the side creates a modern yet classic feel. The photographic design is basic and does not hold my attention. Definitely, I would go with the minimalistic design. As ...
- Wed Feb 10, 2016 11:00 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Prliminary Critique Project 1
- Replies: 13
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Re: Prliminary Critique Project 1
Your first choice has a more modern look. Of the two, I definitely prefer this one though your second design utilizes space nicely and has a nice texture. I'm not sure what you intend to do with the negative space in the upper right corner of design one.
- Wed Feb 10, 2016 10:38 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1, Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2686
Re: Project 1, Preliminary Critique
Thank you for those informative links. I'll definitely look back to those for inspiration. I, too, enjoyed the poem you've included as your body copy. I like the use of serif fonts but I would watch the use of italics. I'm not sure if that's just how the typeface is or if it's the font. The seriffed...
- Wed Feb 10, 2016 10:23 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1, First Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2213
Re: Project 1, First Preliminary Critique
Initially, I preferred the layout with the dark background. The more I thought about the name, though, with a name like 'switch on,' the layout with the white background works better. I also prefer the alignment of icons and text and images on design1 (the one with the light background).
- Wed Feb 10, 2016 10:10 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project1
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2125
Re: Project1
Both of these work well for me. When I first looked at the palm tree layout I wanted the squares to be the same size, but it creates visual interest. Both are great but lack the required paragraph about yourself.
- Wed Feb 10, 2016 10:02 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One, First Prelimary Critique
- Replies: 16
- Views: 2580
Re: Project One, First Prelimary Critique
Are you a sailor, David? The layout of you (I think that's you) on the water is professional. When I look at it I think of business and success. It reminds me of Oracle because of their sailing team and their success. I think I understand what you're trying to do in the other layout but it doesn't q...
- Tue Feb 09, 2016 10:40 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary Critique_Project1_KO
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2607
Re: Preliminary Critique_Project1_KO
Both layouts have a professional look to them. You could mess around with the alignment of the text in the left portion of the first layout. Also in the first layout, the weight of the body copy could be heavier. The picture you use in the first layout works nicely with your color scheme. The second...
- Tue Feb 09, 2016 10:23 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1, First Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2146
Re: Project 1, First Preliminary Critique
The layout where cartoon you is hollering works well. The dark and light purpley triangle shapes bring the eye back to the page after seeing the character hollering. The second layout has a child-ish look to it which is ok if that's the look you want to create. Also on the 2nd layout, I might try al...
- Tue Feb 09, 2016 5:55 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project1 preliminary critique
- Replies: 14
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project1 preliminary critique
rough2_ng.jpg http://www.ge.com/ The GE site inspired rough2. The squares at the top of the website and the navigation layout inspired some thumbnails. Then I looked back at some previous projects for images I could use and found the logos created in 107. rough3v2_ng.jpg http://store.hifructose.com...
- Thu Jan 28, 2016 2:23 pm
- Forum: Introductions
- Topic: Howdy, y'all!
- Replies: 1
- Views: 784
Howdy, y'all!
It's me. I'm Ryan. This class makes me anxious because the web project in 119 were difficult.