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- Thu Sep 21, 2017 2:27 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 16
- Views: 2194
Re: Preliminary Critique
I would go with the first one, the type on the second one against those bold dark shapes gets lost. The colors and shapes are a little too distracting. The first one works very well though.
- Thu Sep 21, 2017 2:26 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Critique _Lea
- Replies: 16
- Views: 2092
Re: Project One Critique _Lea
I like the space one much better, I'm not sure if I get what the cat one is doing, the space layout is effective and works within the elements of design nicely. The colors are nice and the layout is clear and cohesive.
- Thu Sep 21, 2017 2:22 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 preliminary designs
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2254
Re: Project 1 preliminary designs
I really like them both, I would build on the first one or change the full CMYK colors on the second. The second design is great, but having all of those colors fully saturated is a bitt distracting, on really bright bold color against the grayscale background would look great but all of them is a b...
- Thu Sep 21, 2017 1:39 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
- Replies: 16
- Views: 2107
Re: Project 1 Preliminary
I would go with second one, I like the background image as well as the shapes you're playing with, I think more contrast would be good on it however as all the colors are faded. Good job!
- Thu Sep 21, 2017 1:37 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: [Project 1] Preliminary
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2009
Re: [Project 1] Preliminary
The colors in the first one crate a moody feel that I really enjoy, the second one isn't as appealing. I would definitely build on the first, the idea on parallax scrolling is cool as well.
- Thu Sep 21, 2017 1:35 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Roughs
- Replies: 18
- Views: 2396
Re: Project 1 Preliminary Roughs
I like the first one better. The only thing I would suggest is working on the way the body copy flows, having it as a massive block like it is is daunting to a reader and not very appealing. breaking it up and using some movement to create more interesting geometric shapes would probably be more suc...
- Thu Sep 21, 2017 1:33 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Critique
- Replies: 18
- Views: 2218
Re: Project One Critique
The second one really pops, the contrast is beautiful. The only thing I would suggest is some color? It might not even need it though. Great job!
- Thu Sep 21, 2017 1:28 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: GRC 175-2001 project 1
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2196
Re: GRC 175-2001 project 1
These are both very good and very different, personally I would build on the nature one or change the red on the robot one as it is distracting and too fully saturated. Other than the layout is very effective on both.
- Tue Sep 12, 2017 10:04 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project one
- Replies: 18
- Views: 2461
project one
I was drawn toward more non traditional websites. I didn't want to make things messy and wanted to keep it clean while still being unique and interesting. I sort of used the same typography on both so I might play around with that. I was inspired by websites that have full photos take over the entir...
- Sat Sep 02, 2017 6:02 pm
- Forum: Introductions
- Topic: hey everyone
- Replies: 2
- Views: 735
hey everyone
my name is julian let's make some websites n stuff