GRC 175 Learning and Discussion Forum

these are both really well done either would work, the first one could use some more contrast maybe? everything is so bright and light. They both look awesome though.

These are both super cool, I might like the second one a little better? it has an old school album cover feel to it that works really well. The h and the y are a little hard to make but but you could easily fix that.

The second one is awesome I would go with that one. They are both very good, but the shapes being created in the second one and the use of balance and contrast are beautiful.

The second one seems like it's going in a good direction, the first one has a few too many colors they kind of distract from each other.

I'd go with the second one, the body copy with the watermark on the first is a little hard to make out. Maybe fade it a little more? The color choices and overall compositions work well though

These are both really rad and work really well, I like the second one better I think but they at both really good. Nice job!

The color contrast on the first one is a little odd, but the second one works very well. The body copy font is a little hard to read though.

Either of these would work well, the only thing is the body copy gets lost and the script font is not easy to read, the overall composition/ color choices is nice though

I think the paper one is more interesting, using a photo of lined paper would probably be more interesting/ add texture. Using a different font would probably help too, these feel a little basic

These at nice and clean and professional feeling, my only sufgestion would b to frame the photo better, it would create some visual interest as well as make it look like you're not floating in space. Good stuff!