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by SerenDark
Wed Nov 29, 2017 3:57 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3-Preliminary
Replies: 12
Views: 2187

Re: Project 3-Preliminary

The green design is really easy to navigate and is a nice idea, but the paint design is more interesting visually. Try to find a hi-res photo of the dripping paint, and for the title I think you can get away with making the black box solid instead of transparent, with the title white on top and then...
by SerenDark
Wed Nov 29, 2017 3:52 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project #3 ~ prelim
Replies: 12
Views: 2296

Re: Project #3 ~ prelim

I'm a big fan of your second design! It might be worthwhile to make the footer text white and your bodycopy text a little larger, on both pages. Maybe also try making the top part of both pages the same, in regards to the nav and logo?
by SerenDark
Wed Nov 29, 2017 3:21 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Prelim: The Home Stretch
Replies: 12
Views: 2041

Re: Project 3 Prelim: The Home Stretch

The window concept is much stronger and comes together a lot nicer, visually. The font used for all of the major, larger words is hard to read, and also has contrast issues, being white against much lighter greens. I really want to like it, but have a hard time doing so overall. It actually seems to...
by SerenDark
Wed Nov 29, 2017 3:15 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Prelim
Replies: 11
Views: 1947

Re: Project 3 Prelim

Both of your layouts are really nice! I do prefer the second one. Having the text overlay those large images feels really nice, especially with the corner marks. My only gripes are that the navbar might be easy to miss, especially on the homepage, due to how tiny the words are, and there's some cont...
by SerenDark
Wed Nov 29, 2017 3:13 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Box's Project 3 Preliminary
Replies: 12
Views: 2045

Re: Box's Project 3 Preliminary

I like the first design better. It feels easier to view and is nicely expressive. My only major gripe is that the font, while really cool, is hard to read in the footer. I might also recommend that, instead of using true dark black, try using the slightly lighter variant that's in the TMCC logo, as ...
by SerenDark
Wed Nov 22, 2017 4:38 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: [Project 3] Preliminary Critique
Replies: 12
Views: 2081

[Project 3] Preliminary Critique

Hello! So these are my two design ideas for Project 3. They are missing information currently and missing notable, required page links. I wanted to really focus on organization and spacious design with these. The first design utilizes a navbar up top with an additional "interior" navbar fu...
by SerenDark
Wed Nov 22, 2017 1:11 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Final- Link Issue Fixed can view site
Replies: 1
Views: 861

Re: Project 2 Final- Link Issue Fixed can view site

It looks great! I love the font choices and general layout!

The navbar and logo image seem to move places and/or change sizes across pages, and it can be hard to discern the navbar from the normal body type.
by SerenDark
Wed Nov 22, 2017 12:53 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project two_final_slowly
Replies: 2
Views: 897

Re: Project two_final_slowly

It's really cute! Thematically it works together well and your navigation feels nice. I do think you could benefit from some padding on the left, on your Home/Order/Location pages, for the main body contents. So it isn't all right up against the far left side of the containing box.
by SerenDark
Fri Nov 17, 2017 7:29 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Final
Replies: 11
Views: 2291

Re: Project 2 Final

Both sites are gorgeous! I love how expressive and nonstandard your home site is. It feels very artsy. Your nav bar buttons could have a larger type size I think, and the gray type is hard to read against the pink with how thin and narrow the letters are. On your salon site, on the About page, the H...
by SerenDark
Fri Nov 17, 2017 7:24 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 - Final
Replies: 11
Views: 2338

Re: Project 2 - Final

Both sites are incredibly eye-catching and feel so nice to look at! I adore the layout and organization of both! My only criticism is that, on your OJ site, the navbar is hard to read and gets lost compared to the other navigation buttons on the right-hand side. Maybe switch the typefaces in both ar...