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by SerenDark
Wed Nov 29, 2017 7:24 pm
Forum: Resources
Topic: [Github] A curated list of awesome jQuery plugins
Replies: 0
Views: 1586

[Github] A curated list of awesome jQuery plugins

https://github.com/petk/awesome-jquery

Justified Gallery, under the Forms section, is noteworthy. This is a rather nice list in all however.
by SerenDark
Wed Nov 29, 2017 5:59 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: project three
Replies: 6
Views: 1180

Re: project three

Design 1 feels nice with how airy and open it is and its friendly palette. However, the overall organization can use some work and the bodycopy is quite squished/stretched.
by SerenDark
Wed Nov 29, 2017 4:35 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 - Prelim
Replies: 12
Views: 2186

Re: Project 3 - Prelim

Both designs are gorgeous and work really well! As drawn to the second one as I am, I find that I prefer the first one, with the boxes, more. My only recommended change would be to, on the inner page, add more padding between some of the elements. The bodycopy feels sort of squished inbetween the &q...
by SerenDark
Wed Nov 29, 2017 4:30 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: P3 Preliminary
Replies: 12
Views: 2036

Re: P3 Preliminary

The first design is significantly more eye-catching and interesting to digest. The bodycopy feels sort of squished, with all of the elements so close together as they are. The Emphasis courses might also be broken up into more groups, to keep with consistency for subheads as with the First/Second Le...
by SerenDark
Wed Nov 29, 2017 4:26 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 rough draft files
Replies: 13
Views: 2082

Re: Project 3 rough draft files

I lean strongly towards Design 3. The bodycopy feels like it could use some work. There's subheads, but it all runs really close together and doesn't really register as being separate blocks of text. I also wonder how the TMCC logo and navbar buttons might look if they were white instead of black? O...
by SerenDark
Wed Nov 29, 2017 4:17 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project III Roughs, by Francisco
Replies: 14
Views: 2207

Re: Project III Roughs, by Francisco

I adore both designs a lot, but the first one seems to pay off more. I love your use of colors and organization, especially with incorporating the navigation. I kind of feel like your top bar could be a darker gray, however. It's easy to miss as it is and doesn't stand out all that much, especially ...
by SerenDark
Wed Nov 29, 2017 4:12 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary - Melissa Peel
Replies: 11
Views: 2042

Re: Project 3 Preliminary - Melissa Peel

Both designs are gorgeous! I love your placeholder instructors and overall organization. All of the different boxes of bodycopy could be moved down, away from their heads/subheads, a small smidge. The TMCC logo on the footer might do well being pushed far to the corner on the right. I nearly wonder ...
by SerenDark
Wed Nov 29, 2017 4:07 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary
Replies: 12
Views: 1956

Re: Project 3 Preliminary

Wow, both designs are gorgeous but the first one with the gradients takes the cake! Your use of fonts is spot on and your colors are lovely! The body copy feels a bit boring compared to everything else, however. A different font might help it out, or the inclusion of some subheads and/or little acce...
by SerenDark
Wed Nov 29, 2017 4:04 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project 3
Replies: 12
Views: 1895

Re: Preliminary Critique for Project 3

The first design with the word cloud is so much more interesting! My only problem with it is the lack of space between different elements. The Contact feels squished on the bottom, the secondary navbar is really close to the word cloud and doesn't line up with it, and the page 1 headline feels sort ...
by SerenDark
Wed Nov 29, 2017 4:01 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project Three Critique _Lea
Replies: 13
Views: 2122

Re: Project Three Critique _Lea

Both ideas are great but the second one, the geometric one, looks so much nicer. I especially like the inclusion of the graphic of tools in the image up top, among other things, and your font choices are all nice. My big recommendations would be to make sure the Adobe software icons aren't stretched...