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by darian_p
Wed Sep 20, 2017 5:18 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Roughs
Replies: 18
Views: 2396

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Roughs

The first design works the best. I feel if you make the body copy cut off where your navigation bar ends, it would work a little better. Chances are, your not even going to need that much body copy anyway. Also the TMCC logo could be smaller and put at the lower right hand corner. It's grabbing too ...
by darian_p
Wed Sep 20, 2017 5:14 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1-Preliminary
Replies: 16
Views: 2272

Re: Project 1-Preliminary

The second design draws the viewer in a little bit more then the first. However, I would play with the color and font types a bit more.
by darian_p
Wed Sep 20, 2017 5:12 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: [Project 1] Preliminary
Replies: 15
Views: 2009

Re: [Project 1] Preliminary

Go with the the first design! It is absolutely beautiful!!!! The color and imagery work very nice together and the overall design is very professional looking. Good work!
by darian_p
Wed Sep 20, 2017 5:10 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Roughs
Replies: 15
Views: 2100

Re: Project 1 Roughs

Both designs are kind of similar.... Maybe what you could do is line up your body copy/name with you vertical navigation bar. Also tone the color down a bit. It's a little "HEY! LOOK! LOOK AT MEEEEEE!" which isn't bad if it wasn't all over the web page. Make your art do that since you drew...
by darian_p
Wed Sep 20, 2017 5:05 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Critique
Replies: 18
Views: 2218

Re: Project One Critique

These both work very well. I personally am drawn to the bottom design especially if you will be using the design for portfolio reasons. Good work!
by darian_p
Wed Sep 20, 2017 5:03 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1, First Critique
Replies: 17
Views: 2252

Re: Project 1, First Critique

Your second design is very good! The color is nice and overall the website is very readable. Looks very nice, good job!
by darian_p
Wed Sep 20, 2017 5:01 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Aries Project 1
Replies: 18
Views: 2354

Re: Aries Project 1

The first design works the best, the only the I would change is the bright neon pink on the sides. Otherwise it's very nice, good work!
by darian_p
Wed Sep 20, 2017 4:59 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Roughs, by Francisco
Replies: 19
Views: 2423

Re: Project 1 Roughs, by Francisco

The bottom design works the best, however I would line up your body copy so they are next to each other. Maybe put the one on the bottom left hand side inside the grey circle and change the font color black.
by darian_p
Wed Sep 20, 2017 4:56 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project one
Replies: 18
Views: 2462

Re: project one

I think the top design look the best. It has nice imagery and the font styles you choose work really well with that. However, I would make the body copy bigger since you have all that space as well as move you name to the top and the TMCC logo to the bottom.
by darian_p
Wed Sep 20, 2017 4:54 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1
Replies: 17
Views: 2256

Re: Project 1

They are both pretty empty. I would go with the bottom website design just because it look more like a website and the colors aren't all up in my face.