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- Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:58 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary Critique #2
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2304
Re: Preliminary Critique #2
I really like the chalk board layout! It's so cute and constructed nicely. The blue layout has great qualities too, although I feel like the chalkboard layout is a litttttttle bit stronger. I do agree with some of the comments, if you do choose the blue layout, might try some other colors, maybe a p...
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:51 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project Two Prelim
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2449
Re: Project Two Prelim
I think both websites have good qualities. I don't feel as though one is better than the other. Layout 1 has nice imagery and type faces as well as colors, but layout 2 does as well. I think you could go with either one! Although for rough 1 make sure the homepage image has a high enough resolution ...
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:40 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2207
Re: Preliminary Critique
You did a terrific job in the design department! I like both layouts however I tend to like the first one a bit more than the second, I think because of the navigation. The navigation in general is super unique and interesting. I may actually like the second more if your swap out the navigations. Gr...
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:33 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2-Preliminary
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2269
Re: Project 2-Preliminary
I actually like the darker version of the two layouts. It's more stylistic and is more reminiscent of a video game. I also like the use of space and graphic images. Its overall super cool! I might try to reflect the video area with the navigation in the additional web page. It may come off more of a...
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:27 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2259
Re: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique
I personally like your second layout best. The overall pastel color scheme is nice and I like the graphic images you've included in all your designs. The type face seems to be a little illegible to me, might try something without serifs? Nice work, def coming along!
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:21 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2756
Re: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
Oh Erica, such pretty clean designs you've made. I'm very fond of both layouts however, your first layout is my personal fave. I like the orange margins and the use of the graphic symbol as the primary focus on the home page. Now if I was super picky the blue margin space in the additional web page ...
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:12 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: [Project 2] Preliminary
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2254
Re: [Project 2] Preliminary
Personally I like your second green layout better. I feel as though it's clean and easy to navigate. Your first layout is well constructed too however I would change the type color from blood red to a lighter red. The red type is hard to read on the black background. Overall nice, clean, simple layo...
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 3:49 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary 2 Roughs, by Francisco
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2537
Re: Preliminary 2 Roughs, by Francisco
Definitely would use your third layout design, I love the image and your use of space throughout the design. For this company, who's "producing sugar naturally", you may want to emphasize the more organic way to produce sugar (i.e. your 3rd layout) and shy away from implications drawn from...
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 3:38 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: preliminary
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2514
Re: preliminary
oooooo, I like both of these, but I do like the first design a bit more than the second. That image is very intriguing and captures the eye right away. I also like the non-traditional text placement, makes the design look more modern. I feel like you could push the color scheme in the additional pag...
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 3:32 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Roughs
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2327
Re: Project 2 Roughs
I also like the first layout better than the second. I love pink and white together and you've done a nice job of balancing out the two colors throughout the website. I am also fond of the blocky image and text placement in all your designs, gives the websites a nice flow to them. I would def swap o...