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by IvorHarvey
Thu Apr 20, 2017 3:08 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: FINAL - Project 02
Replies: 6
Views: 1400

Re: FINAL - Project 02

Hey sorry about the really late reply to this! Kind of got caught up with.. life I guess! Sorry! But I think you did a really good job with the consistency of each site from the main site of the "bad" homepage to the rest of the pages! I also like how you stayed consistent with the grey-bl...
by IvorHarvey
Sat Apr 08, 2017 11:51 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Final
Replies: 5
Views: 1238

Project 2 Final

ALRIGHT! So I finally got everything working they way I wanted with all the fonts so you won't have to download them! (Thanks to Ed- he's the real MVP!) I realize now with the fonts embedded that each screen takes quite some time to load, mainly because of the heavy font (I think..) So heres the fin...
by IvorHarvey
Fri Mar 24, 2017 10:36 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary
Replies: 10
Views: 2077

Re: Project 2 Preliminary

I really like the first design that you've made- I like how the sepia kind of reminds me of old photography- and this website is dedicated to classic Jaguars. I like the use of the image on the first homepage, and how your text wraps around the hood of the car. I think on the second page of the firs...
by IvorHarvey
Fri Mar 24, 2017 10:29 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project_#2_rough
Replies: 10
Views: 1885

Re: project_#2_rough

I think both your designs have a really good feel to them, they give off this warm nurturing feel to me (especially your second design.) They look to be much easier to navigate than the original, and everything is laid out in a way that makes it easy to tell where navigation actually is. I like the ...
by IvorHarvey
Fri Mar 24, 2017 10:22 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: proj_2_prelim_layouts
Replies: 9
Views: 1655

Re: proj_2_prelim_layouts

I think that you've done a good job improving the original site, and that its much easier to read and navigate. Out of the two designs, I like the layout of the first homepage, even though it needs some work on making clear navigation buttons. I don't really think that the yellow "book online&q...
by IvorHarvey
Fri Mar 24, 2017 10:10 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 12
Views: 2206

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique

For me I think that the first design has a better feel to it. I like how everything is horizontal and the "Expand Your Mind" is really the central focus on this one. I don't feel like you need the underline below the navigation and the logo, because the image breaks it up effectively witho...
by IvorHarvey
Fri Mar 24, 2017 10:06 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 prelim crit
Replies: 9
Views: 1597

Re: Project 2 prelim crit

Well it's definitely a lot better than the original website for sure! My website also had a crazy neon color scheme going on, which made it really hard to read. So saying that I think you've done a good job toning it down, but still keeping it bright and vibrant with your color choices! I think the ...
by IvorHarvey
Fri Mar 24, 2017 9:58 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2
Replies: 11
Views: 2049

Re: Project 2

I definitely feel like the second design is better out of the two, I really like the color choices with the gold, and how it has a transparency in the body copy box so you can still see through to the background. I also like the remake of the logo on the second design, it looks cleaner than the blac...
by IvorHarvey
Fri Mar 24, 2017 9:53 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique EG
Replies: 7
Views: 1348

Re: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique EG

Well I'd have to say that both of your designs are a huge step up from the original website. I like how you keep both in black and white, which helps with portraying the whole dark and mysterious James Bond theme. I think I'm leaning towards the first design because it uses contrast in the headline ...
by IvorHarvey
Wed Mar 22, 2017 9:17 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: preliminary project 2
Replies: 10
Views: 2093

Re: preliminary project 2

Out of the two designs I'm leaning towards the second design. I really enjoy the use of the image as the background, but I would like to see some color in it! Maybe try having the "One Sharp Store" in a color like the first design so that it draws the viewer's eye straight to it so they kn...