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by tweetysmurf2350
Tue Oct 30, 2018 2:33 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Rough
Replies: 17
Views: 3378

Re: Project 2 Rough

I like your first design with the brick wall more, it just speaks to me.
by tweetysmurf2350
Tue Oct 30, 2018 2:31 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Roughs
Replies: 17
Views: 3442

Re: Project 2 Roughs

I like your really clean one but what you are doing with the name of the band by repeating it is making my eyes vibrate. It may be because I am doing this while battling a head cold but it just looks too busy.
by tweetysmurf2350
Thu Oct 25, 2018 4:04 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2
Replies: 16
Views: 3011

Re: Project 2

I really like your first design. The image of the Zebra is really eye catching.
by tweetysmurf2350
Thu Oct 25, 2018 4:00 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Worky Works
Replies: 16
Views: 2794

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Worky Works

I love the first layout set. It has an interesting dynamic and looks very professional. Very good job on making an eye gouging website look beautiful.
by tweetysmurf2350
Thu Oct 25, 2018 3:52 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project 2 prelim
Replies: 16
Views: 3063

Re: project 2 prelim

I like the one with the paintbrushes and the text that reminds me of Indiana Jones. You might want to add more content to the interpages. Just a thought.
by tweetysmurf2350
Thu Oct 25, 2018 3:42 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: JASONHOSIERSCPWEBROUGHPROJECTTWO102418
Replies: 17
Views: 3269

Re: JASONHOSIERSCPWEBROUGHPROJECTTWO102418

I like the second design better. It kind of reminds me of a classified file. Good work in making a terrible website look interesting.
by tweetysmurf2350
Thu Oct 25, 2018 3:37 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: proj-02-rough-critique
Replies: 15
Views: 2859

Re: proj-02-rough-critique

I like the first design better but I think that it will be hard to read the type over the images. I might suggest putting a drop shadow under the type or something else to create contrast.
by tweetysmurf2350
Thu Oct 25, 2018 3:33 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project 2 prelim
Replies: 17
Views: 3114

Re: project 2 prelim

I really like the second layout, It just says "church" to me. I looked up the other website.... Wow... that was very basic. Good job on making a basic website look interesting. I think the dark background on the inner page would make it hard for you to contrast type off of it. Just a thoug...
by tweetysmurf2350
Thu Oct 25, 2018 3:25 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project two / agostina renaud / roughs
Replies: 16
Views: 2822

Re: project two / agostina renaud / roughs

I like the first design better, that other website had... issues.... the logo alone made me want to gouge my eyes out. Good job on making a mess look organized.
by tweetysmurf2350
Thu Oct 25, 2018 3:20 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Plastic Surgery prelim
Replies: 18
Views: 3379

Re: Project 2 Plastic Surgery prelim

Wow... That website is bad and the green is intrusive... The second design is my favorite. It is very clean cut and professional. A drastic improvement on the old website.