GRC 175 Learning and Discussion Forum

Hi Jason! I'd have to say the first one is my favorite. I would remove the transparent circle behind your paragraph though. I'm not sure what it's purpose is and it's distracting. The colors are awesome and I like your description as well. The typefaces you chose are spot on.

I'm having a hard time choosing my favorite. I love your typography work and the colors you chose - they are my favorites. But the sunflower design speaks to my need for simplicity. I think you could use a more expressive typeface with the sunflower if you wanted to add more interest!

Hi Matt! I agree with Evelyn. Your art work is too nice to cover up. Moving the menu to the side or even the bottom would be a better choice. I'm also finding it hard to get interested in the text at the bottom. Maybe a different typeface or background color to accent your painting would work better...

Hello! The pinball design is genius! I'd love to see where you go with it. I love the train layout for it's simplicity and the color is beautiful. I think it's my favorite!

Hi Clara! I'm partial to the tree design. Love the gradient background and the trees remind me of you more than the ticket does. I suggest playing around with the typefaces as well! Great job!

Hey girl, hey! I love both of your designs! I really like the way you made the transparent pullout for the mobile version. I wanted to do that, but couldn't envision how to do it for this critique! Awesome job! I'm drawn to the second flowery version, but I think you could use waaaaay more fllowers ...

Ok! I guess I'll be the first one to post. Rip the band aid off! :| Here are my two designs. Version one was inspired by this website http://www.qotr.org/. I found it while doing research on google and I am always drawn to teal and black (GO SHARKS!) I love simple, clean lines, easy to navigate, des...

Hi Jackal!