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by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:28 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2
Replies: 12
Views: 2357

Re: Project 2

Both designs are very nice! I think to top one works a little better though because of the wood background and since it's a wood working shop it's just meant to be. The only think I would change is the type. With the wood background it's a little hard to see. Try playing with font color and size, yo...
by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:24 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary Critique
Replies: 15
Views: 2387

Re: Preliminary Critique

The first design works much better in both visual appeal and layout. I love the buttons you made for the second page, very sleek! The images and color is nice, but I would really like to see some of the student's work. So far everyone who has done Yale School of Art hasn't shown any sneak peeks of t...
by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:20 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary
Replies: 15
Views: 2342

Re: Project 2 Preliminary

SARAH!!! THEY ARE BEAUTIFUL!!!!! I love the green! I think the second version works better in layout but your first one withe imagery and navigation.
by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:18 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 rough
Replies: 13
Views: 2434

Re: Project 2 rough

Both are good designs, They use imagery and color that scream kid friendly. The layouts are extremely simplified which is great since kids can't usually navigate anything too complex. I feel like you really want to cut down though on body copy though. Children aren't going to want to read a paragrap...
by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:14 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary 2 Roughs, by Francisco
Replies: 13
Views: 2328

Re: Preliminary 2 Roughs, by Francisco

I like the first and third design the best. The both use great color and imagery.
by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:12 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
Replies: 14
Views: 2481

Re: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique

The first design is beautiful! I love the simple imagery, it reminds me of all the logos and art work I see at the grocery store in the fruit and juice sections.
by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:10 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique
Replies: 14
Views: 2198

Re: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique

The second design for me looks better, but I really like you logo and navigation bar from the first. Maybe you can combine those and just go overboard with cuteness!
by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:08 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2-Preliminary
Replies: 14
Views: 2148

Re: Project 2-Preliminary

both designs work well with the game's look and feel. What I think would be cute is to use the angelic home page from the first design but then use the grungy dark theme for the inner pages.
by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:06 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary Critique
Replies: 15
Views: 2167

Re: Preliminary Critique

The second design looks better however I really like your second page for the first design. Maybe you can find away to mix the two together?
by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:04 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project_2_roughs
Replies: 12
Views: 2240

Re: project_2_roughs

I like the first design better. I would change the navigation though, it feels a little out of place.