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by erika.murray
Mon Dec 11, 2017 6:36 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 - Final
Replies: 6
Views: 1361

Project 3 - Final

Hi everyone! My Project 3 is done and ready for viewing. I really wanted to keep the TMCC green but pair it with a contrasting black as well as a bold blue color to add interest. The home page is meant to be bold and interesting in contrast to the current GRC page. Most of the pages are simple and s...
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 24, 2017 5:43 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary
Replies: 12
Views: 1949

Re: Project 3 Preliminary

I love the layout that you made in Illustrator! It has a really flat look to it which is stylish. I think it has more character than using photos. I think you could work on unifying the color schemes you will be using for each page, but otherwise the layout looks great. Awesome work!
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 24, 2017 5:41 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project 3
Replies: 12
Views: 1883

Re: Preliminary Critique for Project 3

Your typographic layout is for sure more eye-catching. The layout is nice and neat. The bold colors work well too. Instead of repeating the typographic image on each inner page, find some cool photos to put on them instead. Great job!
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 24, 2017 5:38 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Box's Project 3 Preliminary
Replies: 12
Views: 2019

Re: Box's Project 3 Preliminary

I am liking your first layout best, but take the straight edge frames from the second and replace the squiggly frames. The idea of the splash homepage is cool. I also like the use of an image in the top of the inner page.
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 24, 2017 5:36 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Prelim: The Home Stretch
Replies: 12
Views: 2026

Re: Project 3 Prelim: The Home Stretch

I love that first layout! Your color choice is great, and the use of white space with the boxes is so nice. The photo idea will be really cool. Only thing to change would be to make those two green colors a bit more contrasting, they are pretty close in color.
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 24, 2017 5:34 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project Three Critique _Lea
Replies: 13
Views: 2110

Re: Project Three Critique _Lea

I like both of your layouts. The computer layout might be limiting in terms of space, though. The second layout has a really cool artistic effect and I think it would work really well. My only suggestions are to take away the clipart stuff at the top (or match the colors with your layout) and narrow...
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 24, 2017 5:32 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project #3 ~ prelim
Replies: 12
Views: 2224

Re: Project #3 ~ prelim

I like the image that you're using in the second layouts. The navy and green go together well. You may want to put a green rectangle behind your navigation text on the homepage.
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 24, 2017 5:28 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Prelim
Replies: 11
Views: 1922

Re: Project 3 Prelim

I am really liking how clean your layouts are. I prefer the second, mostly because of how you're using design elements (that transparent rectangle on inner page and the corner marks for text). I think you need to use the image from your first layout and replace the skeleton picture, because it will ...
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 24, 2017 5:26 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: P3 Preliminary
Replies: 12
Views: 2020

Re: P3 Preliminary

That first layout is fantastic! I love the white against the colorful drawing. The left side navigation is nice too, and the Graphic Communications title is creative. I would make your navigation text more bold. If you added a colorful drawing to each page it would make each page pop. Have your subh...
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 24, 2017 5:22 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3-Preliminary
Replies: 12
Views: 2156

Re: Project 3-Preliminary

Both ideas are nice, but the green one looks really clean and easy to navigate. I like the rounded rectangle on the inner page, it creates some kind of comfort. On your homepage, add some type or something under that image rotator so that there isn't only one thing on the homepage. The paint idea is...