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by JulianEmme
Wed Nov 29, 2017 10:23 am
Forum: Project Four
Topic: project three
Replies: 6
Views: 1176

project three

Super late, but here are m preliminaries. Still working, but here's what I've got so far
by JulianEmme
Wed Nov 01, 2017 4:31 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary Critique #2
Replies: 15
Views: 2250

Re: Preliminary Critique #2

I'm definitely going for the blue one, I'm not sure I like the color scheme of the other one, feels a little too old school whereas as the blue one feels modern and inviting. I would suggest adding in some more visual interest though, something to get the viewers attention. Maybe a complementary col...
by JulianEmme
Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:37 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2-Preliminary
Replies: 14
Views: 2149

Re: Project 2-Preliminary

I like the light version better, but both are a little confusing. Listing characters on the homepage without establishing what it's about is confusing to someone like me who doesn't know what this is for.
by JulianEmme
Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:32 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique
Replies: 14
Views: 2199

Re: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique

I would go with the second one, I would recommend using a different font for the bodycopy however, it's a little to creative to read that much in. The color choices are strong. Both still feel a little weird since there are no actual photos though, maybe try working with some photos?
by JulianEmme
Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:28 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
Replies: 14
Views: 2485

Re: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique

I would go with the first one, the overall design is really clean and effective. The bright colors are super inviting and refreshing. I like the icons in the second one though, maybe there's a way to combine them? Whichever direction you go will work really well.
by JulianEmme
Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:23 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project Two Prelim
Replies: 15
Views: 2404

Re: Project Two Prelim

I like two better, I would suggest picking a typeface with more thickness if youre going to put type over an image, the scripty font gets kind of lost. I like you're colors and photos the good job!
by JulianEmme
Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:18 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: [Project 2] Preliminary
Replies: 15
Views: 2199

Re: [Project 2] Preliminary

I like the way the first one looks, type choices are nice as well as color schemes. I don't really get the joke but that's okay. Both feel like they are missing something, maybe adding in a photo or illustration would help fill them out. The second one reminds me of the Reno zombie Crawl designs.
by JulianEmme
Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:12 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2
Replies: 12
Views: 2359

Re: Project 2

Either one would work, the only suggestions I have would be to tighten everything up, there is a lot of open space where you don't need it, also for both I would probably move the title a little further down it feels to high up in the layout. Maybe ply with some color choices a little more to preven...
by JulianEmme
Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:07 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project two Layout Roughs
Replies: 14
Views: 2105

Re: Project two Layout Roughs

Really good job showing unity through type and color choices, I would go with the first one, I especially like the way the inner page turned out. Really good work.
by JulianEmme
Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:02 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio
Replies: 15
Views: 2157

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio

Either of these would work, they are both strong color-wise and typographically, I tend to go towards the second one a little more just because of the color scheme. For the inside page I'm not sure I like having the nav down low like that, it's unconventional and I'm not sure I would like that on a ...