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by CarnutianDragon
Wed Dec 13, 2017 5:41 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Final
Replies: 0
Views: 1123

Project 2 Final

Well, I've finally finished my two websites. It's been fun making these websites and I hope that they continue to work. http://www.grc175.com/student/fall_2017/sarah_alvarado/ My redesigned webpage is Draconika Dragons which is linked to my "Projects" navigation. I'm happy to be done with ...
by CarnutianDragon
Wed Oct 25, 2017 4:39 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary
Replies: 15
Views: 2342

Project 2 Preliminary

For this project I chose to do the website Draconika Dragons: http://www.draconika.com/index.php For my first design I chose to focus on the myth and majesty behind draconian lore, with much of my design being derived from Celtic influence. I chose to diverge from the commonly used color red and ins...
by CarnutianDragon
Fri Oct 06, 2017 6:59 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 14
Views: 1955

Project 1 Final

I decided to go with my second design as became many people's first choice. Overall I am pleased with the design, I will be adjusting small things here and there when I actually develop it into a functioning page. I adjusted the margins and padding of my body copy as well as played with the size of ...
by CarnutianDragon
Wed Sep 20, 2017 4:57 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Roughs, by Francisco
Replies: 19
Views: 2412

Re: Project 1 Roughs, by Francisco

Hi Francisco, I really like the color and feel of your second design. It has a nice professional quality too it combined with your interesting font choices and use of soft shapes. The only thing I would change is the placements of your body copy as they appear off centered. Great work and I can't wa...
by CarnutianDragon
Wed Sep 20, 2017 4:52 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Preliminary Critique - Melissa Peel
Replies: 16
Views: 1999

Re: Project 1 - Preliminary Critique - Melissa Peel

Hi Melissa, Wow! You have some really great designs. I'd say that my favorite is the first one since the colors really jumped out at me. Great use of blurring too, it makes the background really interesting and thought provoking. The only thing I would suggest is to make the text and buttons in the ...
by CarnutianDragon
Wed Sep 20, 2017 4:48 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Preliminary
Replies: 18
Views: 2230

Re: Project 1 - Preliminary

Hi Erika, I really like your first design. Your use of large bold font as well as the interesting placement of your name really caught my eye. I also am really enjoying your use of bright blue and white, it gives off a fresh, new feeling. I would suggest placing your navigation else where since it f...
by CarnutianDragon
Mon Sep 18, 2017 6:51 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Preliminary Critique
Replies: 18
Views: 2509

Re: Preliminary Critique

Hi Hannah, I am really liking your second design but to make it really pop I'd suggest adding design elements from your second into it. The blockiness of your second design combined with the round shapes making up your central character in your first could create a very interesting composition. Defi...
by CarnutianDragon
Mon Sep 18, 2017 6:48 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: GRC 175-2001 project 1
Replies: 17
Views: 2189

Re: GRC 175-2001 project 1

Hi Jose, Your first design is so clean and beautiful! I love the feathered effect you used on your header image, it ties into the rest of the design so nicely. I would say that you should do something with the right side of your design, maybe add in some feature work your have? Great job and I can't...
by CarnutianDragon
Mon Sep 18, 2017 6:44 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Critique
Replies: 18
Views: 2208

Re: Project One Critique

Hi Susie,

Your second design is awesome! The contrast works so nicely and combined with the bold "Hello!" quickly catches my eye. I would suggest that you condense the image portion of your design as it makes it feel bottom heavy.

Great job and I can't wait to see the finished product! :D
by CarnutianDragon
Mon Sep 18, 2017 6:41 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1
Replies: 17
Views: 2249

Re: Project 1

Hi Pearl, There isn't very much that I can give input on but I would say that you should go with your second design. I feel that it has the most potential out of the two. Your color is nice but maybe look up some color palettes to make your design pop more. You have a nice start and I can't wait to ...