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by gracelark
Thu Apr 27, 2017 3:58 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 preliminary
Replies: 6
Views: 1323

Project 3 preliminary

Please see my two preliminary design options.
by gracelark
Tue Mar 28, 2017 4:23 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Prelim project 2
Replies: 2
Views: 815

Prelim project 2

I chose http://mountainmusicparlor.com/. I'm having a difficult time choosing between the two background images; I really like them both. I chose to overlay the image on prelim 2 onto distressed wood, which I could also do to the warmer image in prelim 1.
by gracelark
Tue Mar 28, 2017 9:10 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: preliminary project 2
Replies: 10
Views: 2101

Re: preliminary project 2

I quite like the American flag text logo you designed. I think you might not need the additional flag and eagle/flag images. I like the b/w food slicer images, but might have a variety of different pieces of equipment. Not sure about the purple in the navigation buttons; I think I'd like it better i...
by gracelark
Tue Mar 28, 2017 8:18 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 12
Views: 2221

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique

I love this background image, it's totally ethereal and dreamy and fitting. I feel like the name gets lost in the logo redesign; I actually don't mind her original logo and I even think that the gold color of it would fit nicely right in place of the gray one; there's plenty of gold in that backgrou...
by gracelark
Tue Mar 28, 2017 8:12 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique EG
Replies: 7
Views: 1350

Re: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique EG

Wow, that original website really was shit! Your swirly silhouette top bar is pretty cool. I'd like to see the 007 logo still in this design somewhere. I think the black/white/gray color scheme is fitting and I like the image you chose. I'm not sold on your typeface choices in your navigation or add...
by gracelark
Tue Mar 28, 2017 7:22 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary
Replies: 10
Views: 2086

Re: Project 2 Preliminary

I like homepage_2 best. I love that image with the big gorgeous grill and I like the taupe color you pulled from it. I'm not sold on the rust color you chose in the navigation (as on Gallery); I think you could maybe pull a red out of that badge on the home image. I also think you could stick with a...
by gracelark
Tue Mar 28, 2017 7:13 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project Two Preliminary Critique
Replies: 10
Views: 1996

Re: Project Two Preliminary Critique

Nice soothing designs. I think I like the background texture of the second one better; it's more flowy. But I also like that the first design has that nice mountain image which adds some interest. I'm not sold on the tan accent color, I think I'd like just a bit more color pop. The typeface choice f...
by gracelark
Tue Mar 28, 2017 7:06 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 prelim crit
Replies: 9
Views: 1604

Re: Project 2 prelim crit

Well that second headline, with the little kids holding up the letters, is damn cute! It's darling, and for me it's the winner. I think you're on to something with the fresh fruit background as well, but I think that you need all the 'What is Penny Juice?' text right there on the homepage. I'm not s...
by gracelark
Tue Mar 28, 2017 6:56 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: proj_2_prelim_layouts
Replies: 9
Views: 1658

Re: proj_2_prelim_layouts

I like the concept of the image with the doors opening to the ocean. I think the black stroke boxes are unnecessary. I think you could play with type a little more on your headline and maybe pull a color from the background image to create navigation buttons.
by gracelark
Tue Mar 28, 2017 6:51 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project_#2_rough
Replies: 10
Views: 1893

Re: project_#2_rough

I like your logo redesign. I think the purple design is more interesting; I also definitely prefer the script font choice you used in your navigation better than the italics of the other design. On the home page, I think you could make the image larger. On the About Me page, I would like to see the ...