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by Ryan_Hartman
Thu Apr 28, 2016 5:33 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Skeletons
Replies: 13
Views: 2657

Project 3 Skeletons

They're not so spooky or scary but they are skeletons.The true bare bones.

Version one has more of a side button set up verses the second is on the top.
Yeah super simple yay..
by Ryan_Hartman
Thu Apr 14, 2016 4:54 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 final
Replies: 8
Views: 1734

Project 2 final

Here's the original Reno Furry Forum Site http://renofurries.com/forum/

Here's my version of the with additional colors http://grc175.com/student/spring_2016/ryan_hartman/
by Ryan_Hartman
Mon Mar 21, 2016 2:03 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 11
Views: 4416

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique

They're both great designs but the first one has a better contrasts that brings out the text for the pages, unlike the second one is a bit to bright. I also like the font selection that compliments the environment of the Truckee area. I'd consider taking the second website's brick background and app...
by Ryan_Hartman
Mon Mar 21, 2016 1:51 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project2 preliminary critique
Replies: 10
Views: 1975

Re: project2 preliminary critique

The first design has more of a design i'd see at the Roller Kingdom verses the second design seems for fitting for a more adult rollerskating establishment. The Roller Kingdom is more of a kid friendly environment so i'd consider brighter colors or party type background that would compliment the for...
by Ryan_Hartman
Mon Mar 21, 2016 1:38 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Kaylyn Dazey Project @
Replies: 11
Views: 2308

Re: Kaylyn Dazey Project @

It's very well organized and the simple color pallet makes it easier to read the text. But the text might need to go up a few points because it's hard to read. I like the mountain imagery but it might need more opacity because it brings more life to the site and shrink down the face to half because ...
by Ryan_Hartman
Mon Mar 21, 2016 1:30 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 12
Views: 2401

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique

Both are nice designs, but i like the second brighter design better because it portrays the biography more towards her verses the books she has created. It also portrays more of a fluent personality verses the first design that has more of a solid rocky structure with the fonts you've used.
by Ryan_Hartman
Mon Mar 21, 2016 1:25 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project 2 preliminary critique
Replies: 12
Views: 2924

Re: project 2 preliminary critique

I like the how you added a more broad range to the website verses it's original narrow view.
The added range of colors has great contrast that draws your eyes to the center pages.
by Ryan_Hartman
Mon Mar 21, 2016 1:21 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 10
Views: 1968

Project 2 Preliminary Critique

I've decided to recreate the exciting website http://www.renofurries.com/forum / I kept the basic design with add color and imagery to keep things simple. Character is based on Reno's Bighorn and i've presented the front page and about us site pages I've also included the a fake link to our yearly c...
by Ryan_Hartman
Mon Feb 29, 2016 8:52 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 15
Views: 2681

Re: Project 1 Final

The grey scale and organization are both very well. The separation of the illustration and the body text are well made with the difference in the contrasting colors and i like your quote in your illustration. The Red text also pops out well pulling the viewers to read your text box.
by Ryan_Hartman
Mon Feb 29, 2016 8:49 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final submission for project one
Replies: 14
Views: 2649

Re: Final submission for project one

Firstly, fantastic organization and great installations within the welly placed areas. The contrasting white really pulls out the images more, subtract the bottom image sadly, just because of the whites in the fur, but still well done. The font is a great choice especially when your using a forest s...