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by gr8ful1
Fri May 13, 2016 1:13 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Final
Replies: 1
Views: 819

Project 3 Final

Hi all! I'm done with Project 3! here's the link to my homepage http://grc175.com/student/spring_2016/kirsten_sorensen/project1root/index.html I tried hard to make it responsive to avoid the white box around it like my other two, but couldn't get my background image to work right. So it's fixed pixe...
by gr8ful1
Tue May 03, 2016 4:12 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Skeletons
Replies: 13
Views: 2673

Re: Project 3 Skeletons

Both designs are similar, I think I prefer the green over the peach color. I would make the color boxes less opaque, They dominate and cover up your background image too much I think. My only other suggestion is that your margins/centering seems off, especially the TMCC logo on your peach header. Go...
by gr8ful1
Tue May 03, 2016 4:08 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project Three Preliminary Critique
Replies: 8
Views: 1750

Re: Project Three Preliminary Critique

Hmmmm, I like elements of both of your designs. I think your design with the white background looks a little more complete and refined to me. The layout seems more cohesive and readable. I do prefer the graphics on your other design though, they look more original and less stock to me. My only sugge...
by gr8ful1
Tue May 03, 2016 3:52 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Kaylyn's reuploaded project three
Replies: 16
Views: 3049

Re: Kaylyn's reuploaded project three

Both very good designs, I actually like different parts of them equally! I like the graphics more in your first design, and the overall page layout. I like the circle headings as well, they really draw my attention. I think both are well balanced even though they are not symmetrical, which makes the...
by gr8ful1
Tue May 03, 2016 3:46 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: project3 prelim
Replies: 10
Views: 2189

Re: project3 prelim

Although I appreciate your trying to get creative with navigation in your first design, I prefer the second one. I like the background image, and the logo is creative and awesome. My only suggestion is maybe centering the navigation vertically, it looks really close to the body background image.
by gr8ful1
Tue May 03, 2016 3:40 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: RE: GRC175 Project 3 Preliminary Designs J. Tenenbaum
Replies: 12
Views: 3111

Re: RE: GRC175 Project 3 Preliminary Designs J. Tenenbaum

I really like your first design with the artwork of the mountain most. I think the pictures you have in your body copy are much more effective and stand out better against the white background than against the whole page graphic on your second design. I think both designs are well laid out and eye c...
by gr8ful1
Tue May 03, 2016 3:16 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 12
Views: 3278

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique

I like both of your designs, but I like the first one better. It has more of a graphics vibe to me than the frog does. I like how you put "classes" across the back of the course listing too, it adds much more visual interest than just linking to the catalog. I like the three column layout ...
by gr8ful1
Tue May 03, 2016 2:59 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Prelim_Kami
Replies: 13
Views: 2714

Re: Project 3 Prelim_Kami

I like your version 2 better, I think the vertical navigation is something new and a good idea. I might put them into a bar or something to make them pop out more, they kind of blend into the page. My only other suggestion is that it doesn't say Graphic Communications on the home page anywhere, so i...
by gr8ful1
Tue May 03, 2016 12:12 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Roughs
Replies: 13
Views: 2756

Re: Project 3 Roughs

I really like your first design. It feels more balanced to me in it's layout. I like the photos in the headers too, although I think the "graphic communications" header in white gets a little lost in places of them. I really like the fonts you used, especially in your navigation bar. Nice ...
by gr8ful1
Tue May 03, 2016 12:06 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project# 3 Roughs
Replies: 12
Views: 2668

Re: Project# 3 Roughs

Both designs are good, clean and laid out well. I prefer the first one, I think the darker navigation/title and footer bars offer more contrast that really frames the page. I agree it is a little plain, maybe some texture in your framing elements or navigation sidebar would add some interest. Good j...