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by ariaaearnest
Tue May 03, 2016 5:18 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Roughs
Replies: 13
Views: 2752

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Hey Lauren!

I really like your first design! It's very simple but elegant. The stubble background texture is a nice touch. I would just play around with you type.

Aria
by ariaaearnest
Tue May 03, 2016 5:13 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 12
Views: 3276

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique

Hey Kaycee,

I really like your first layout. I like how you used the recent awards picture for your header! I would just change your body type so its easier to read, it could just be me but I had trouble reading it. other than your design is great!

Aria
by ariaaearnest
Tue May 03, 2016 5:05 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 preliminary
Replies: 8
Views: 1791

Re: Project 3 preliminary

Hey Ben,

All of your ideas seem pretty similar so I would just do what Michael said and combine your ideas. I would try to tweak your layout more so it looks more organized. Also do you have a bigger version of your rough? It's really hard to read your text.

Aria
by ariaaearnest
Tue May 03, 2016 4:30 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Kaylyn's reuploaded project three
Replies: 16
Views: 3044

Re: Kaylyn's reuploaded project three

Hey Kaylyn While I love your designs I have to agree with everyone else in that it seems to shy away from the grc theme of the school. I definitely think you can show off your illustrations though. As much as I love pink I would use colors more related to our school, you can still keep them bright. ...
by ariaaearnest
Tue May 03, 2016 4:24 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: RE: GRC175 Project 3 Preliminary Designs J. Tenenbaum
Replies: 12
Views: 3106

Re: RE: GRC175 Project 3 Preliminary Designs J. Tenenbaum

Hello Jody!

Both of these designs look amazing! I have more of a preference for the first design though since it seems more academic. I would also make the font color for the bottom links a little darker.

Aria
by ariaaearnest
Tue May 03, 2016 4:19 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project3 preliminary critique
Replies: 12
Views: 2517

Re: Project3 preliminary critique

Hey Remi!

I really love you second design! It looks very stylish and clean. I would just lower the transparency on the star background so the text is easier to read.

Aria
by ariaaearnest
Tue May 03, 2016 4:16 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary
Replies: 11
Views: 3049

Re: Project 3 Preliminary

Hey Kristen!

I would go with your second design. The colors are much easier on the eyes and the layout is much cleaner. I don't think you need the grey boxes in the middle of the second page. I would also make the font color on the bottom links darker so they would be easier to see.

Aria
by ariaaearnest
Tue May 03, 2016 4:12 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Prelim_Kami
Replies: 13
Views: 2710

Re: Project 3 Prelim_Kami

Hey Kami!

I think your second design is much stronger than your first. The navigation is much easier to read. With the text box though I would make it more transparent. For your navigation I would make it look more like a navigation bar rather than have the text just floating.

Aria
by ariaaearnest
Tue May 03, 2016 4:08 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Skeletons
Replies: 13
Views: 2668

Re: Project 3 Skeletons

Hi Ryan, While it's good to have a layout plan I feel like you need to work on these a lot more. I would do some more research for your project. I would go with your second design because it looks much cleaner. I pretty much agree with what everyone else has already said on here critique wise. Aria
by ariaaearnest
Tue May 03, 2016 3:47 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project Three Preliminary Critique
Replies: 8
Views: 1744

Re: Project Three Preliminary Critique

Hello Gwen, I really like your first design. I've noticed you added the other programs but I think for this project you just need to do the graphics program. I would also stick to just one navigation bar. Too many can be distracting. I would also go with a different font for your layout. But other t...