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by dnorwood
Sat May 14, 2016 8:26 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Final
Replies: 1
Views: 845

Re: Project 3 Final

Nice job overall. My only suggestion on project 3 is that the purple type on the black is hard to see. A small outer glow (Photoshop fx) would make it stand out and still keep your color scheme going. Sorry about your gallery...but I figured out how to look at the pictures. See you in the fall. Hope...
by dnorwood
Wed May 11, 2016 11:24 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Final
Replies: 1
Views: 795

Project 3 Final

http://grc175.com/student/spring_2016/denise_norwood I wasn't sure I could do this, but it's here! I reworked parts of it and now all of the text, except for my poem on the home page and the welcome message on the Natural Advantage Advantage home page is live text. Their address and phone number on ...
by dnorwood
Thu May 05, 2016 8:06 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Let's share our art works for this project!
Replies: 19
Views: 12819

Re: Let's share our art works for this project!

A good idea since not all of our classmates are GRC students.
I seem to be having upload issues though.
If you go to the student work on our main page, I have a gallery of some of my work on the website. You are welcome to take screenshots (or right click/save image as) of any of it.
Denise
by dnorwood
Sun May 01, 2016 9:24 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project Three Preliminary Critique
Replies: 8
Views: 1744

Re: Project Three Preliminary Critique

I agree with you...design 1 is much more visually appealing. You did a good job with the contrast and color against a dark background. Two things stand out though: The staggering of your pictures on pg2 (course offerings) is off. The left one needs to come up or the right one needs to come down. The...
by dnorwood
Sat Apr 30, 2016 9:47 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Kaylyn's reuploaded project three
Replies: 16
Views: 3044

Re: Kaylyn's reuploaded project three

Both of your designs are interesting. I think I like the layout of rough 2 better, especially the placement of the 'TMCC GRC' circle. What doesn't appeal to me is the over abundance of pink and the scooter girl. The links and your title are really hard to read. I do like the image you have on the ho...
by dnorwood
Sat Apr 30, 2016 9:33 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Prelim_Kami
Replies: 13
Views: 2710

Re: Project 3 Prelim_Kami

I definitely like version 2 best. Your use of the photos is really good, especially the graduation one (she looks so happy!) I am not so sure about the sideways navigation though. Maybe the problem is that they don't stand out well and catch your attention. High five for creativity and imagination. ...
by dnorwood
Sat Apr 30, 2016 9:26 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: RE: GRC175 Project 3 Preliminary Designs J. Tenenbaum
Replies: 12
Views: 3106

Re: RE: GRC175 Project 3 Preliminary Designs J. Tenenbaum

They both have the possibility of turning out really good. I like design 2 best tho, it has more contrast and I really like your illustration (very well done on that!). The only thing that catches my attention as being off, is the white background of the 'menu' box, it doesn't fit with the rest of t...
by dnorwood
Sat Apr 30, 2016 9:16 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Skeletons
Replies: 13
Views: 2668

Re: Project 3 Skeletons

I like the layout of version 1 better. The text is more compact and not strung out across the page. I agree with the other comments about the opacity of your boxes. They do cover up too much of your background picture. A thought would be to lower the overall opacity and to add just a semi-thin borde...
by dnorwood
Sat Apr 30, 2016 9:08 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project3 preliminary critique
Replies: 12
Views: 2517

Re: Project3 preliminary critique

They are both ok, but I like the Universe one better. The first one is pretty generic and could be used for any TMCC program. The universe one has really good contrast and is more visually interesting. I think tho, you could maybe do more with all of that black. Maybe add in a few small pictures of ...
by dnorwood
Sat Apr 30, 2016 9:01 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary
Replies: 11
Views: 3049

Re: Project 3 Preliminary

You have two pretty good designs here. I like your first design better tho since this was supposed to be a fun project. It is bright and eye-catching. Maybe a little too much, but that is actually an easy fix...take all of that white type and make it a dark grey, say an 80% or 90% black. That will t...