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by rmiyashiro
Wed May 04, 2016 5:15 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 preliminary
Replies: 8
Views: 1775

Re: Project 3 preliminary

I definitely prefer your first design. The color choices work well and the layout is simple. There's too much going on in the background of your other design.
by rmiyashiro
Tue May 03, 2016 5:54 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Let's share our art works for this project!
Replies: 19
Views: 12707

Re: Let's share our art works for this project!

terrific idea, Remi! However, I don't know if I'd classify any of my stuffs as art.
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by rmiyashiro
Fri Apr 29, 2016 5:23 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project# 3 Roughs
Replies: 12
Views: 2643

Re: Project# 3 Roughs

Both designs are clean and easy to navigate. The 2nd one works better for me. The placement of the TMCC logo is more good. The 2nd layout just feels better to me.
by rmiyashiro
Fri Apr 29, 2016 5:19 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: GRC site roughs
Replies: 9
Views: 1764

Re: GRC site roughs

Both designs are cool but I prefer your gold design. The pattern is interesting and goes well with the font you chose for the Graphic Communications title.
by rmiyashiro
Fri Apr 29, 2016 5:16 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 12
Views: 3246

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique

Both are well-laid out. I like the layouts with the picture of Dan on the front of it best. The font choices are good. Everything is easy to read and find.
by rmiyashiro
Fri Apr 29, 2016 5:10 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Roughs
Replies: 13
Views: 2723

Re: Project 3 Roughs

I definitely like the first design more. Maybe try lowering the opacity of the images at the top to make the words more good.
by rmiyashiro
Fri Apr 29, 2016 5:07 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary
Replies: 11
Views: 3029

Re: Project 3 Preliminary

I love the rainbow bars at the top of your first design. This layout is the one I prefer. The background is cool and the effect you have on the text works well with the background. My only concern is the TMCC logo. I think we have to keep the logo colors http://www.tmcc.edu/marketing-communications/...
by rmiyashiro
Fri Apr 29, 2016 5:00 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project3 preliminary critique
Replies: 12
Views: 2491

Re: Project3 preliminary critique

It'd be quite convenient if you could "accidentally" shut the forum down again when the final is due, but only if I'm not finished with my project by the due date. Both designs are neat. The first design (the blue one) I find more appealing than the green and black one. My only concern is ...
by rmiyashiro
Fri Apr 29, 2016 4:54 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Skeletons
Replies: 13
Views: 2646

Re: Project 3 Skeletons

I agree with Joe and Lauren. Go with the peachy color and adjust the opacity. The amount and flavor of the green is too much in my face.
by rmiyashiro
Fri Apr 29, 2016 4:50 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: RE: GRC175 Project 3 Preliminary Designs J. Tenenbaum
Replies: 12
Views: 3078

Re: RE: GRC175 Project 3 Preliminary Designs J. Tenenbaum

Both are terrific designs. I prefer the blue one. The silhouette at the bottom is cool and the blues and the greens work well together.