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by onnimelon
Fri Dec 08, 2023 2:31 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 4 Final
Replies: 0
Views: 13918

Project 4 Final

Hello everyone! I went perhaps a little too ambitious for this project, particularly with the homepage. If you decide to make windows smaller, you'll see just how broken I mean! It was fun doing a more design focused idea, but it was difficult from a technical coding standpoint to get it to all shin...
by onnimelon
Sat Nov 18, 2023 2:23 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 04 Prelim!
Replies: 10
Views: 59769

Re: Project 04 Prelim!

The bubble effect is so cute. I agree though that the green design is more on brand here for the school website. I think the text might be too bold to comfortably read the paragraph type but great idea with this landing page. I'm definitely more inspired for my own
by onnimelon
Sat Nov 18, 2023 2:21 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 04 Prelim
Replies: 10
Views: 77369

Re: Project 04 Prelim

I love the font choices in these! That navigational menu looks great in the one inside the green boxes. Very clean. I really like those designs best! The only thing is that it might be too text heavy but it's all lorem so it's a super small thing.
by onnimelon
Sat Nov 18, 2023 2:20 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project04_Preliminary
Replies: 11
Views: 45047

Re: Project04_Preliminary

I agree with everyone's comments regarding the paint brush effect! This is a small comment but for some reason my brain really isn't used to the hamburger menu on the right maybe consider putting it on the left. That could totally just be me though. I really like design 2 much better. I hope you use...
by onnimelon
Sat Nov 18, 2023 2:17 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 4 Prelim
Replies: 10
Views: 40540

Re: Project 4 Prelim

I agree with Chloe. I think the green one is more on brand for sure. The sideways title effect for the mobile version is a creative way of fitting large headlines in without compromising sizing/layouts. I know it's all lorem ipsum right now but I don't think you need so much text. Pull back a little...
by onnimelon
Sat Nov 18, 2023 2:15 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: P04 Prelim
Replies: 10
Views: 53419

Re: P04 Prelim

I like the ribbon bookmark design element you have consistent in the designs for the first one. The green might be too bright against the text but I like the neon green effect here. I definitely prefer the first design. If it's possible doing a cool drop down animation might be fun
by onnimelon
Fri Nov 17, 2023 1:49 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 4 Preliminary Post
Replies: 11
Views: 37654

Project 4 Preliminary Post

For this design I wanted stick to the TMCC style guiding. I have greeked out text, greyed out images and not the final font for headlines so it's still not as dynamic looking yet but hopefully it's still more interesting than the original site. Link to original site: https://www.tmcc.edu/visual-perf...
by onnimelon
Mon Nov 13, 2023 1:52 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Final
Replies: 11
Views: 23324

Re: Project 3 Final

Cart functionality can't be easy but having lofty goals shows a lot of effort and thought. I like the concept of having "floating" images of merch! I agree though that it could've been bigger. I think the vintage page is my favorite, Mr. Hunt is just staring at me over some hats.
by onnimelon
Mon Nov 13, 2023 1:49 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3
Replies: 12
Views: 12655

Re: Project 3

This looks super cohesive! The font choice was great. The simplified banner was also a great choice. It's great that you kept up with the basic theme for every page. Plus I learned that there was a bond museum so that's always fun
by onnimelon
Mon Nov 13, 2023 1:47 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 final
Replies: 12
Views: 16823

Re: Project 3 final

Looks like the page is working on my end! I agree the press start is a fun concept. I had issues with the server too! I ended up just deleted the whole project 3 folder. Maybe consider doing that but I don't think there's any issues anymore. Super neat