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by Fatkid53
Tue May 03, 2022 3:05 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: project_4_prelim_jcowan
Replies: 12
Views: 1207

Re: project_4_prelim_jcowan

Thanks for the insight into your creative process, James. These are always fascinating to me. I'm all about that Design 1, myself. I really like the use of contrast throughout. It's so strong and does a great job of illuminating important content. Everything stands out and works well. That rotated ...
by Fatkid53
Tue May 03, 2022 3:02 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: project4 prelim???
Replies: 12
Views: 968

Re: project4 prelim???

Honestly I am leaning towards the green design if only because most of us shy away from the color. However I am dying for some imagery if not only to see what it would look like against the " vivid " background. I might embolden some of the font choices to help them occupy your own space. ...
by Fatkid53
Tue May 03, 2022 2:57 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Proj 4 prelim...here we gooooooo!!!
Replies: 10
Views: 830

Re: Proj 4 prelim...here we gooooooo!!!

Bwaahahah! That's a great staff line up. I like the design you have going the heavy black and the minimal green. I would put something to occupy the negative space on the landing page, text, student work maybe...An awesome start and I am curious to see how it ends up.
by Fatkid53
Tue May 03, 2022 2:42 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: project IV preliminary
Replies: 12
Views: 801

Re: project IV preliminary

I am leaning towards your second design, I am digging the deco sections and the script font you chose, the UI is a little confusing for me with the burger menu at the bottom and nav at the bottom unless it is planned to be a fixed image? Other than that possibly playing with the fonts moving forward...
by Fatkid53
Tue May 03, 2022 2:37 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: project04_roughs
Replies: 11
Views: 744

Re: project04_roughs

I am diggin' all your designs but I am specifically to mobile 3 and desktop 2. I like the great use of imagery and color and I like that you went all out without including elements of the original site. The UI is a little confusing and the actual text gets lost a bit but I'm sure you have noticed th...
by Fatkid53
Tue May 03, 2022 1:05 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 4 prelim
Replies: 11
Views: 758

Re: Project 4 prelim

Um, lions, because pokemon only exist in the metaverse, lol, and a lion verses a laptop or a phone, I am lion all the way. As for your design, I like where the second one is going, the use of box elements gives it a solid UI experience. I would work on defining the smaller elements with some padding...
by Fatkid53
Tue May 03, 2022 12:59 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project04: Preliminary!
Replies: 7
Views: 413

Re: Project04: Preliminary!

I dig the second version of your roughs, the high contrast colors with the busy but not distracting background really provolks a visual interest. That being said the only thing I could find that I can nitpick is maybe a bit more breathing room for the body copy, it feels like it is a bit over powere...
by Fatkid53
Tue May 03, 2022 12:54 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: project 4 prelim
Replies: 13
Views: 916

Re: project 4 prelim

While I am naturally drawn to the first design's color I think the second layout is more the direction of a solid UI experience. That being said, I think maybe a combination of the two designs into a super lion robot design might be the way to go as I see it. On the second design possibly the use of...
by Fatkid53
Tue May 03, 2022 12:50 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 04 Prelim
Replies: 13
Views: 871

Re: Project 04 Prelim

I am all about the second design, I agree with coach that it break the mold of title at the top, I also like that you are leading with a different color than the green and the minimalist background is also something I dig. The body copy and general layout could use a little padding and margin work b...
by Fatkid53
Tue May 03, 2022 12:37 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project04 Prelim
Replies: 11
Views: 836

Re: Project04 Prelim

I like the second set of designs, it's screams TMCC and has a lot of the qualities of the original design incorporated into the site. The one thing that is a little off when I look at it is, why a split navigation instead of spanning the whole bar and giving the buttons a little breathing room? Also...