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by it's_crysta
Wed Mar 03, 2021 5:07 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 15
Views: 1808

Re: Project 1 Final

I like how easy your layout is to read and navigate. It looks nice and I like that you chose the monochromatic blue layout.
by it's_crysta
Wed Mar 03, 2021 4:54 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project01 Final
Replies: 16
Views: 1812

Re: Project01 Final

I like the green for the gradient, I think it works nicely. It also fades from the picture really well too. Great work!
by it's_crysta
Wed Mar 03, 2021 4:49 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final Project 01
Replies: 13
Views: 1535

Re: Final Project 01

I really like how you change the layout in your mobile design, having one of your top shapes be lower than the other one helps fill up the empty space nicely. Your color pallet is also warm and nice to look at. It looks really good!
by it's_crysta
Fri Feb 26, 2021 2:03 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project 1 final
Replies: 16
Views: 2028

project 1 final

Hello, I ended up picking the neon layout for my final. I finally added my bio, a whole lot shorter than the placement body copy I had in my prelim, so I had a lot more room for other things. I moved the tmcc info and my email to its own box. I added extra neons as well, the darker colored ones are ...
by it's_crysta
Mon Feb 15, 2021 9:00 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Preliminary roughs
Replies: 16
Views: 1806

Re: Preliminary roughs

Hi Kelsey, Getting big time sweet shop vibes from your work and I think that's a fun angle to go with for a personal webpage. Brown is one of my favorite colors but there's something about that shade of brown and the purple it's with that kind of clashes for me. Looking forward to seeing what your f...
by it's_crysta
Mon Feb 15, 2021 8:55 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 14
Views: 1615

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Hi Kendall, I like the use of a starburst behind your picture in the second one and i think it would be nice to see those kind of shapes in other places in your design just to see how it works. And I know you've been told this a lot, but yeah that green on that purple isn't working. Can't wait to se...
by it's_crysta
Mon Feb 15, 2021 8:50 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Preliminary Critique
Replies: 18
Views: 1988

Re: Preliminary Critique

Hi Izzy, I like that you went with a cork board and a chalk board aesthetic. I'd pick the chalk though, I like the space theme and the textures you get with it. I think it would be nice if the box your type is in and the same outside texture as the one under it, that's the only thing I can think to ...
by it's_crysta
Mon Feb 15, 2021 8:41 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Prelim
Replies: 15
Views: 1627

Re: Project 1 Prelim

Hi Stephanie, I really like your first design with the water color background and the golden lines, they work very nicely against the cool colors. My advice would be to create those brush stroke textures yourself because the images you used gets pretty crunchy looking around the edges. Can't wait to...
by it's_crysta
Mon Feb 15, 2021 8:37 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary roughs
Replies: 16
Views: 1823

Re: Project 1 Preliminary roughs

Hi Estrella, Your first design is super cool, I like the effect that some of the lines and the girls have and how the she almost fades into the background. You also picked some really cool typefaces. I do think it's a bit overloaded on the colors though and cutting down to 2-3 of them could help wit...
by it's_crysta
Mon Feb 15, 2021 8:32 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
Replies: 15
Views: 1777

Re: Project 1 Preliminary

Hi Katherine, I love your background picture for you first layout, the sand also looks the the night sky with stars and it fits in nice with your insta handle. I think a pop of color would help make you design with this one, like just a little bit of gold or a blue. Other than that I would make sure...