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- Mon Feb 15, 2021 8:27 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
- Replies: 16
- Views: 1916
Re: Project 1 Preliminary
Hi Heather, I really like your first design, I think the green and black look really nice together and I like how you header looks with the transparent strip over it. The only thing I could think to improve is the placement of your email, I feel like it's a little too close to the edge of the box. M...
- Sat Feb 13, 2021 4:13 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Prelim
- Replies: 17
- Views: 1971
Re: Project One Prelim
Hi Angela,
I like your first design over the second one, the warmer color pallet has a little bit of contrast issues that the blue one doesn't have. I like the font you chose and your logo looks really good. Looking forward to seeing your final design!
I like your first design over the second one, the warmer color pallet has a little bit of contrast issues that the blue one doesn't have. I like the font you chose and your logo looks really good. Looking forward to seeing your final design!
- Sat Feb 13, 2021 4:05 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary Critique!
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2077
Re: Preliminary Critique!
Hi Lindsey, I like your second design over the first one, I think if you just fixed some contrast issue you have it'd be perfect. The blue and yellow you have now are kind of hard to look at but if you took the yellow that you have in the type box and tried a darker blue it would help fix those prob...
- Sat Feb 13, 2021 3:59 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary Critique Project 1
- Replies: 16
- Views: 1832
Re: Preliminary Critique Project 1
Hi Kassandra, I like where your first design is headed, I think there some kinda of optical allusion effect that happening with it though that making everything look a little bit off even though it isn't. I think if you made more of an argyle type pattern with the shapes. I love how you cut yourself...
- Sat Feb 13, 2021 2:42 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project_001
- Replies: 14
- Views: 1562
Re: project_001
Hi Gavin, Your first design is the strongest, I like the pink with the black and white and your font choice. I think you should justify you body copy, change the TMCC logo to black, and cut yourself out of the the picture and put that on a black rectangle background and play around with some lines, ...
- Sat Feb 13, 2021 2:04 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 19
- Views: 2239
Re: Project One Preliminary Critique
Hi Allison, Both of your designs look really cool, I love the different shapes and patterns in them. You used gradients super well in your second design. My favorite is the first one though, the only thing I would change is your body copy because the line length get too long and putting it into para...
- Sat Feb 13, 2021 2:00 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 18
- Views: 2276
Re: Project One Preliminary Critique
Hi Arisa, I like how different both of your designs are and I think you could use either for your final products. For the first one I would try to clean it up a little bit and try using solid color boxes instead of 2-3 layers of transparent ones. I think if you had some blank areas with the boxes it...
- Fri Feb 12, 2021 9:29 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 preliminary critique
- Replies: 16
- Views: 1828
Re: Project 1 preliminary critique
Hi Sal, Both designs are really good, I like how you made your background picture all green and how the hand lays over your name but the cropping of it does bother me a little. For the second one I would make a text box the shape of the building that it's over and put your type in that. Either way I...
- Fri Feb 12, 2021 9:13 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
- Replies: 14
- Views: 1658
Re: Project 1 Preliminary
Hi Sequoia, I love how different all of you designs are and that they all showcase you different ways. My favorite is the last design, the red and blue are so electric. I would eyedrop a blue from the background of your picture and use that as the blue you're using for your solid color so it fits in...
- Fri Feb 12, 2021 9:06 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
- Replies: 13
- Views: 1469
Re: Project 1 Preliminary
Hi Jordi, I like the typeface you picked for your first design, it being a little more different than the font you used for your bodycopy helps a lot. I also like the over lapping transparent triangles over the background. I would try making the one on the right start at a different height than the ...