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by it's_crysta
Mon Feb 15, 2021 8:27 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
Replies: 16
Views: 1916

Re: Project 1 Preliminary

Hi Heather, I really like your first design, I think the green and black look really nice together and I like how you header looks with the transparent strip over it. The only thing I could think to improve is the placement of your email, I feel like it's a little too close to the edge of the box. M...
by it's_crysta
Sat Feb 13, 2021 4:13 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Prelim
Replies: 17
Views: 1971

Re: Project One Prelim

Hi Angela,
I like your first design over the second one, the warmer color pallet has a little bit of contrast issues that the blue one doesn't have. I like the font you chose and your logo looks really good. Looking forward to seeing your final design!
by it's_crysta
Sat Feb 13, 2021 4:05 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Preliminary Critique!
Replies: 17
Views: 2077

Re: Preliminary Critique!

Hi Lindsey, I like your second design over the first one, I think if you just fixed some contrast issue you have it'd be perfect. The blue and yellow you have now are kind of hard to look at but if you took the yellow that you have in the type box and tried a darker blue it would help fix those prob...
by it's_crysta
Sat Feb 13, 2021 3:59 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Preliminary Critique Project 1
Replies: 16
Views: 1832

Re: Preliminary Critique Project 1

Hi Kassandra, I like where your first design is headed, I think there some kinda of optical allusion effect that happening with it though that making everything look a little bit off even though it isn't. I think if you made more of an argyle type pattern with the shapes. I love how you cut yourself...
by it's_crysta
Sat Feb 13, 2021 2:42 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project_001
Replies: 14
Views: 1562

Re: project_001

Hi Gavin, Your first design is the strongest, I like the pink with the black and white and your font choice. I think you should justify you body copy, change the TMCC logo to black, and cut yourself out of the the picture and put that on a black rectangle background and play around with some lines, ...
by it's_crysta
Sat Feb 13, 2021 2:04 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
Replies: 19
Views: 2239

Re: Project One Preliminary Critique

Hi Allison, Both of your designs look really cool, I love the different shapes and patterns in them. You used gradients super well in your second design. My favorite is the first one though, the only thing I would change is your body copy because the line length get too long and putting it into para...
by it's_crysta
Sat Feb 13, 2021 2:00 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
Replies: 18
Views: 2276

Re: Project One Preliminary Critique

Hi Arisa, I like how different both of your designs are and I think you could use either for your final products. For the first one I would try to clean it up a little bit and try using solid color boxes instead of 2-3 layers of transparent ones. I think if you had some blank areas with the boxes it...
by it's_crysta
Fri Feb 12, 2021 9:29 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 preliminary critique
Replies: 16
Views: 1828

Re: Project 1 preliminary critique

Hi Sal, Both designs are really good, I like how you made your background picture all green and how the hand lays over your name but the cropping of it does bother me a little. For the second one I would make a text box the shape of the building that it's over and put your type in that. Either way I...
by it's_crysta
Fri Feb 12, 2021 9:13 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
Replies: 14
Views: 1658

Re: Project 1 Preliminary

Hi Sequoia, I love how different all of you designs are and that they all showcase you different ways. My favorite is the last design, the red and blue are so electric. I would eyedrop a blue from the background of your picture and use that as the blue you're using for your solid color so it fits in...
by it's_crysta
Fri Feb 12, 2021 9:06 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
Replies: 13
Views: 1469

Re: Project 1 Preliminary

Hi Jordi, I like the typeface you picked for your first design, it being a little more different than the font you used for your bodycopy helps a lot. I also like the over lapping transparent triangles over the background. I would try making the one on the right start at a different height than the ...